|Reviews for Only a Nobody|
| LifesLover chapter 2 . 11/19/2010
I'm not too... sure about this one. How did Axel even know that Roxas was Leon's son? It's not as though Roxas made any mention of it.
And it was quite quick to end and very rushed at the beginning. Axel loves him after a little while, Roxas returns it even though he'd had no indication from Axel that Axel was interested that way? It just doesn't feel believable.
I think it's a good premise, and I know you could have done a lot more with it. You're a good author.