|Reviews for Jack of Diamonds, Queen of Hearts|
| thetyger chapter 4 . 2/27/2012
OMG this is my favourite story of yours!
And I love all of your stories! You are such a good writer, I completely believe this is what Jane's early adult life was like! Amazing, keep it up!
| ClaMiAl chapter 4 . 12/18/2011
Ooooh, nice! I love getting a bit of an insight into Jane's past. And you're very good at writing the Jane/Angela pairing - I especially like how we get to see him through her eyes. I really hope there are more chapters coming, this i really good!
| criminalxxxmindsxxxfreak chapter 4 . 8/12/2011
I don't read many oneshot-series like this, but I read "Courting Fire" and had to read this as well. I really love the insight you provide into Jane's life, starting out with Angela and how he came to be the Patrick Jane that we know on the show, and the Patrick Jane that he was before Red John as well. A very beautiful depiction, I might add. These little snippets of their life together are so very realisitc, it really is like watching a flashback scene on the show. Brilliantly written. I cannot wait to read whatever you've got planned next for this!
| Janssye chapter 4 . 6/2/2011
Wonderful! When will you be updating again? :)
| mentalistlover chapter 4 . 5/27/2011
Please upload the next chapter. Its almost been two months. I am so in love with this story, I have to say you are a great writer, this is one of the best stories i have ever read. You derserve 100000 reviews I am so addicted:)
| castiello chapter 4 . 4/22/2011
Oooh, I LOVED this! Great installment. Wonderful mixture of light and dark, just like the show. I like Jane learning about the Lizard Brain and other tricks he knows as an adult. The doggie doo was my favorite part (that really WAS mean!). Plus, we got to see what I interpreted as Red John's first kill - complete with a Walmart smiley. I felt very in tune with Angela's emotions: switching from lighthearted on the way to work, to downright disturbed. Nice job!
| Aqua Mage chapter 4 . 4/9/2011
Wow. I loved this one. I really like the way you write their relationship; it feels very real.
| Jinxauthor Mel chapter 4 . 4/9/2011
*doing little happy dance*
I absolutely love this chapter. The possibility of some actual gift always excites me beyond words, and the way you wrote it mostly from Angela's POV made the whole incident even more believable. Also, I like how you used a (developing) talent that we already know he masters later since we witnessed it from the present Jane. .
| Gone2Far chapter 4 . 4/8/2011
So very, very glad that you updated this story.
When I grow up I want to write like you.
| MissDonnie chapter 4 . 4/8/2011
I loved the last story...it was beyond wonderful, what a great writer you are.
Thank you for sharing
| klcarr892 chapter 4 . 4/8/2011
I love this story so much and the update had perfect timing with last night's episode. Great chapter.
| mentalistlover chapter 3 . 3/22/2011
I love this story so much!:) please write the next chapter soon. I cant wait:):):)3
| castiello chapter 3 . 2/27/2011
Nice entry! I like how you mirrored the two halves of the story. Not surprised that Patrick was gambling - glad to see Angela was smart enough to figure it out. It's cool how you mix little bits of adult-Jane dialogue ("One of my failings, I guess") with younger-sounding dialogue - it matches with his speech in the episode "Throwing Fire." He is still very much a kid, but with definite glimpses of the man we know he will grow into. Love all the little mentions of red sprinkled around ("circled in red", Mars, the red truck) and the continued hints at darkness to come. Patrick thinking he is above menial work: classic Jane arrogance. Also, I find it hilarious that this guy with probably 225 IQ still has no idea what to do with his sobbing girlfriend. It fits well with his character, since adult-Jane certainly seemed keen to avoid a weeping Van Pelt on the show...:) Enjoyed the make-up at the end of the chapter - it was sweet and funny. Made me smile, even though I know how it all ends. Good job!
| klester1987 chapter 3 . 2/25/2011
I agree with Janssye
| Janssye chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
I really love this! I don't like Jisbon, not because I don't like her. It's just I don't want Jane and lisbon ending up together, and trow all his feelings for Angie away.. But this is wonderfull.