|Reviews for Better|
| Nasya chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
| DoveFeathersAndSnowFlurries chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
| immakingmyownluck chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
Aw! that was really good! i liked the whole thing! if you were to ask my favorite parts i wouldnt have any! the whole thing was awesome! you did a wonderfu l job! great work!
| Seosh chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
Any chance of a follow up chapter? XD
| DiNUTZzo chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
Nicely done and I love the ending. Keep writing!