|Reviews for Piece of the Puzzle|
| Toby860 chapter 17 . 4/25/2013
maybe the reason she was late getting to the house is cause she's pregnant again. I like the story.
| FF's Nightmare chapter 17 . 2/22/2013
This story is just TOOOO Weird for me. I'd would've never fall for my rival's and my crushes' daughter at all.
| Angels will bleed from pain chapter 17 . 12/14/2012
Love sweet love...ahhhhh good story good story..
| imsabbel chapter 17 . 12/3/2012
Hm. All the "cliches" in Narutos and Momos talk are totally correct. Transformation in not physical. There is no regeneration bloodline in Uzumakis. Nobody was bothered by a 15 year old Shikamaru smoking.
The whole scene read as a rather bland and obvious author tract. Put it in the AN next time.
Also, having Naruto forget more or less everything before his coma, and refer to Sakura and Sasuke as "Mr. & Ms. Uchiha" makes him feel, well, not Naruto-like. Him considering them as parents really drives it home how he got the short end of the stick, with them looking down on him no matter if he made Hokage or not (as they literally did near the end of this chapter).
Sasukes comment about having this planned also is not a nice thing in a family born with brainwashing eyes, and seeing that there are only 2 chapters left, this will I guess left hanging.
Still, I like the story, and it is good to see it actually being finished.
| ZShaq chapter 17 . 10/7/2012
I honestly have to say that this is the best fanfic I have ever read. And trust me, I've read lots. I began reading only about 3 days ago, and after only reading through about half of the first chapter, I was hooked on the story. Up to now, having gotten through the 17th chapter, I have been reading from 2 chapters during the daytime, or losing sleep going through about 6, not stopping until I finish or unless I pass out from exhaustion. One of the best things about it was how you tied in the many different relationships that have been talked about throughout the world. I was originally partial to either the NaruSaku or NaruIno relationships, but now I wish that the creator of Naruto would read this and make this the next step for the Naruto series. And although there were many sad additions to the story, such as the deaths of many beloved Naruto characters, these only helped to strengthen the story and add in different ties to make the plot thicker and more addicting.
I especially loved how you brought in many new OCs that were all extremely diverse but still tied together in the end, and how they all brought different emotions, settings, actions, and reactions to the story. Aside from the best OC being Momo, I very much liked Momo's eldest younger brother, Shippu, since he was a mix of the incredible Orange Hokage of the Village Hidden in the Leaves and the boy who gave Kakashi his title as Kakashi of the Sharingan.
I am eagerly awaiting for the next chapter, but I am also dreading it as it means that the story will be one step closer to coming to an end. You are a very talented author, and I am impressed with your amount of skill.
| Rad Beoulve chapter 17 . 9/30/2012
I can't remember if I reviewed or not, but I certainly will now. I absolutely adored the "take that"s in this chapter towards fanfiction ideas that many authors have used such as the commonly-used "old enough to kill, old enough to drink/smoke/fuck" among others. It's such a strange feeling coming back to a story I remember reading during its initial chapter release and seeing how much it's grown since then. I honestly didn't get much of a "show, don't tell" feeling while reading this.
If anything, the only thing that slightly annoyed me was the intervention by Sasuke to Naruto, but that's more of a personal gripe rather than a flaw in your story. I tend to favor characters getting over their emotional hurdles all on their own. I get a little peeved whenever other characters (related or not) put their two cents in. This is promoted from annoyance to an offense to me when said intervening characters threaten/blackmail the suffering characters into getting over their issues.
Before this turns into a personal rant, I'd just like to say that just the mere fact that I've been reading this story since the first chapter was put out says a lot about how successful you've been at grabbing my attention. While I'm a little disappointed that there are only two chapters left (maybe, depending on your choice to stick with that or write more), I can take solace in that I'll be reading about Naruto and Momo making their relationship work before and after their wedding.
I eagerly await the next piece of this particular puzzle to be uploaded. Good luck to you.
| Cenright chapter 17 . 9/29/2012
I think you did a very good job of making it a story with plot, instead of just a romp in the sheets. If someone wants to read a Horizontal Tango, well then they can find another story that is lacking plot. I for one, feel that this story does better than it would have if every other chapter had a Perpendicular Hula happening.
| Dudtheman chapter 17 . 9/29/2012
great story fun chapter to read thanks
| KamilahKaliope chapter 16 . 7/4/2012
TT Naruto...Poor Naruto...
Momo is one of a few OC that I like... She's great! Good job!
| Mr.Destructo chapter 9 . 5/5/2012
like the story so far but truth fully would it even matter if momo was a mary sue since this seems to be a story about how naruto and her fell in love and not seemingly about how momo became the most ruthless shinobi in history overnight killing legions of fan boys and slaughtering her opposition effortlessly and becoming hokage at the age of 12 and gaining a harem of all the naruto males ever created that she somehow makes time to have sex with individually every night and still stay awake the next morning did i mention her ability she randomly creates to crap out cookies and gold bricks at will?
| Sephiroth owns u all chapter 12 . 4/8/2012
Awesome Story Please Continue
| ForeverFallen76 chapter 16 . 3/28/2012
I love this story! I don't know about the other readers, but I can clearly picture Naruto sitting down to read to his children how he and their mother met and fell in love. Its rare, especially today, to see two people whom have children, still be so in love with each other. In fact, its almost like a fantasy or legend when you think about it. I try not to, as when you're a realist all the time, the world looks rather depressing, no? Anyways, great chapter and I can't wait to see your next update! Until then. Later.
| sulfur angel chapter 7 . 3/23/2012
This story has given me much to think about. Especially this chapter. Specifically, the beginning and end. Much to think about indeed...
| Elemental Dragon Swordman chapter 16 . 3/21/2012
That was a nice conversation Naruto had with Arashi and Shippo and can't wait for the next chapter. Like the reactions Naruto and Momo showed when Arashi used the Sexy technique and also like the moment when Momo comforted Naruto in this chapter.
| Angels will bleed from pain chapter 16 . 3/20/2012
Been awhile..I just want to kno..who from naruto generation hav died..from all his friends..