Reviews for Not So Short After All
lovedoesn'thurt chapter 3 . 8/20/2011
I love your story! Poor Bree! At least she found out some of her gift. Great story :-) I hope she finds someone like Diego.
Blessed Belieber chapter 3 . 1/5/2011
Its pretty good but, I wish youd stick to Edwards Actual personality more in chapter three when bree attacked Bella...usually hed maybe growl and slam her to the ground but thats it...otherwise dont let my critism bring you down...youre an excellent writer n i think u should continue on with this story!
JoLLY rAnChEr 18 chapter 1 . 12/7/2010


Oh and why doesn't Bree go look for Fred and tell him about the Voutouri (i don't no how to spell that)






thats it i'm done

JoLLY rAnChEr 18 chapter 3 . 12/7/2010

MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 2 . 11/20/2010
can u plz make bree a lil bit sad about diego the guy that she loved is dead

i'm srry if that sounds mean but most of theses fic have bree all happy as a clam about getting to live and all that when she kinda sorta wanted to die in the first place anyway srry about my rant lol

this stry is really good and well written i lovved tssl and i hated how bree died

anyway i cnt wait to read more

awsome story

i loved the hunting bit

this fic is plz plz plzzzzzz update soooon!