|Reviews for From the Flame to the Spark|
| DukeBrymin chapter 2 . 12/4/2010
I think I'm really going to like your Ginny.
| DukeBrymin chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
Very enjoyable premise-I'm looking forward to more.
| thegriffin97 chapter 4 . 12/4/2010
Ok, so this is actually a crossover fic? HP and Teen Titans? That should be clearly marked.
I have no problem with Ginny being the lead, but the more you dilute Harry's involvement the less interested I become.
| Hoisin chapter 4 . 12/4/2010
Hilarious bit with Luna and Sirius and scary (and a little funny too) bit with the dark creature in Regulus' room.
I can just see Molly now when Ginny gets home "GINEVRA MOLLY WEASLEY, WHAT HAPPENED TO YOUR DRESS" _.
Looking forward to more.
| kiwifan13 chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
I loved Ginny's reaction once she had woken up - classic! Can't wait to read more :)
| Comet Moon chapter 4 . 12/3/2010
Best Chapter so far.
| Comet Moon chapter 3 . 12/2/2010
no clue who riley is.
But Luna times two would make fantastic mates for the dastardly due. 3 years ain't that much.
| YukiKyo chapter 3 . 12/2/2010
So happy to see this story updated. I wasn't sure how enthusiastic I'd feel about having something non-HP in the story, but you've worked it in quite nicely and it fits perfectly so far.
Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work.
| kats24 chapter 2 . 11/21/2010
I think that you are off to a great start, but I wonder why you didn't turn pettigrew into the ministry. I can't wait to see what you have for us next time.
| karekid2004 chapter 2 . 11/19/2010
really good story hope to see more soon
| dragyn42 chapter 2 . 11/19/2010
First off, this is an excellent story so far in only two chapters. I would greatly look forward to the rest of it. Some specific concrit for this story first:
- Watch the latin. Magic is not latin, and its pretty pretentious to try and make spells more powerful by adding it. Colloportus would have been just fine without the eternity addition. And stretching a spell to three words is not really done in canon. Use latin as a base and then mash it up to create a fun sounding spell
- Balance. These stories need to feature Harry as the hero. Be careful with Ginny and what she does. If she becomes too prominent, its no longer Harry fulfilling the prophecy and his fate, but Ginny doing so. You seem to have a good balance of it, so far though, and that is very promising.
Now something a bit more general. The summary of this story makes me want to read this Harry Potter story. I checked out your author page to see if there were other HP stories you've written, and there I found the larger summary. You really need to mark this story as a crossover and add just a little bit more to the summary to indicate it.
By that larger summary, Im sorry to say I probably won't continue following this story when it gets to the crossover bits. I'll stay with it and hope your writing proves me wrong, but, to me, it seems just too much and a bit too ridiculous for a HP story.
Your writing, however, is very good, and I wish you great luck in your future writing endeavors.
| TemperedRose chapter 2 . 11/19/2010
so... ginny has sirius now and he'll be her pet dog... awesome! hehehe
| mmendoza688 chapter 2 . 11/18/2010
Very Cool! I think I've only seen one story where only Ginny goes back in time plus you've got Harry's POV on this too so thats even better. Helps people see how things differ from the original!
| golfnjen83 chapter 2 . 11/18/2010
| Comet Moon chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
Maybe she can convince her parents for a dog at Hogwarts. Enlist others aid.
LFTM (Look forward to more)