I had a certain amount of irritation with the whole French thing.

If this is the way you want to do it then do make a note that the story is halfway in French.

It would have saved some time.

And here i thought there was another story with good potential out there.

Great start, I love your writing style. Can't wait to see what happens, update ASAP

Really like how your story has been set up so far. Awesome characterization of Harry. Eagerly awaiting the next update.

love where this story is going. I hope to read what you put up in the future.

quite interesting so far, would like to see more

Oh dear. Looks interesting enough so far. :)

Very well written, and it draws you in so quickly. The inclusion of old foreign languages was nice, and I can totally understand Harry's frustration.

To be honest, we need more Assassin's Creed crossovers. I confess; I look forward to seeing Harry take up the white cowl and start combining magic and the hidden blade to assassinate fools. But that's just my inner nerd raising his head.

I'll be eagerly awaiting updates. Keep up the good work.