Reviews for Harry Potter and the Assassin's Creed |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love the gory realism. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow. I live this story tor a lot of reasons. The first is Harry's reactions to the world long ago and your descriptions. I'm wondering a little when bad things will stop happening to him (being rescued is a good start) and how he is going to find his feet. Of course it wouldn't to not to have at least a few bad things happen still. You have to admit that almost getting burned as a witch is sort of a low point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well-written and draws you in. Love the bits of history you've incorporated here. I hope you continue this. Thanks for sharing, anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Errrr... I am french and the people language is not a french language (even in the past). Can you make the translation because it is hard to understand your story ? Besides, your fanfiction seems to be great :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story, I can't wait for your update, I'm glad your showing just how anti muggle predjudice developed in the Harry Potter Universe, and I'm looking forwards to seeing what Hogwarts is like during this time. |
![]() ![]() I do hope you're continuing this - I keep coming across it again, and re-reading it, and re-LOVING it, and then remembering that it's a WIP and being sad because I just want to know what happens next! It's just one of those stories - unless the next bit is nonexistent, I'll keep on going! (It's how I found FF in the first place - too long between HP books!) |
![]() ![]() good fic but i think it got a bit too gorey for my liking but very good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() not to mention that you haven't updated for almost 2 years.. Ok, that's sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you're really going at it really slowly... |
![]() ![]() ![]() you should have put in translations. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome. I will admit, I'm disappointed that it will be a while before we begin to see the Brotherhood, much less Altair, but this is just really good. I know that constructive criticism is helpful and wanted, but I honestly didn't notice anything that I think needed improvement... It seems a little slow, but I'm well aware that the reason for that is because you want to build up Harry's character. Keep on writing, this is spectacular and very vivid! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is quite an amazing and intriguing piece you have written. Kudos to you for having captured ancient times and traditions in text like this. Harry's reactions also feel genuine to me but then again, that is only my opinion. Please do continue updating and I would also like to know what was the olre of wizards in the clash between Templars and Assassins? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did Harry make a horcrux? |