Reviews for Harry Potter and the Assassin's Creed
gaamundsen chapter 4 . 8/19/2012
A truly awesome story I very much enjoyed. Combined two of my favorite things- British History and Harry Potter. I'm disappointed you haven't continued this, and hope you return to it at some point.
Sean chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Retard, I speak English. Harry Potter was in English, assassins creed was in English, so why is almost everything said in this chapter not in English. I'm sure you would get a lot more readers if they could understand what the fuck they were reading.
The Flying Frog chapter 4 . 8/8/2012
Very good story. I just found it and have been reading it all the way through. You now have a dedicated reader.

I love your insight into medieval culture and the problems Harry's been having in the past. I loved how Harry tried to appeal to the monks common sense and charitable spirits that they professed to have, but their actions only went on to prove how little of both they actually had. I loved how the old 'deaf' monk turned out to be his only friend in a world that would burn him alive for existing. I'm also betting that the reason those 'wands' and the horse was saddled wasn't because the old kind monk arranged it, but because Harry was to be killed that next day and the Deacon would've been leaving as well.

Especially loved Harry's reaction to the prostitute he unwittingly bought when he couldn't understand the language. So typical of a 15 year old Harry who has to go through a lot of maturing.

I read the Author's Note and I'm glad you're going novel length. But does that mean Harry's going to have a romantic interest in this timeline? It can't all be action and death.

Speaking of death, Pierre de Castelnau's real description wouldn't have gotten any sympathy from me. But I applaud what you've done instead. You're showing a remarkable insight into the medieval world with those little details, and I bow before it *bows, with a dramatic hat flourish.*
Dream of Cream chapter 4 . 7/22/2012
Damn, you're never going to continue this huh? I still harbor the hope that you will though... *sigh* And here I was hoping to see a Good HPXAC crossover with a TOUGH Harry. Badass!Harry would have been pretty cool to read, especially since you're actually taking the time to develop his character. The developing of characters always captures my interest. I do so hope you continue this.
WolftheForsaken chapter 4 . 7/22/2012
Hey I hope this story isn't abandoned! It's really good and realistic and there are too few of hp ac crossovers!
BobTheSkrull chapter 4 . 3/31/2012
Awesome chapter! This is an incredible story, I really hope you update soon.
Thekilleregglord chapter 4 . 3/10/2012
The funny thing about this story is that you are an excellent writer and so technically you really know what you are doing, but plot wise this story is really hard to get through.

Mostly because Harry is one of the least sympathetic description of him I've read. In your story he's a whiny bitch who is always upset by his suffering, traumatized by his surroundings, and idiotic when it comes to his talents. Also he's alternatively to old and witty (when he's arguing with the Deacon) or too stupid (pretty much any other time). He's super out of character in other words, he reads more like what you would expect if some random entitled 13 year old wizard (who wasn't very good at magic) went back in time. But Harry is 15, shows no indications in the books of feeling entitled, or being unable to handle pain and suffering, nor of feeling much fear under pressure (which you always have Harry shaking with, or throwing up or other bullshit).

Basically your and awesome writer, the world is well constructed and generally interesting and awesome. But I hate (or don't care about) your Harry Potter and generally hope he dies. Which really hurts the story's ability to immerse the reader.
EVILGRIM chapter 4 . 3/4/2012
Umm...Hmmm...Why haven't you updated this? Its like cutting off the porn when your on the cusp dude! *screams in frustration* :(
XxAlysxX chapter 4 . 2/27/2012
Oh sweet merciful Brother Jacques! And thank Merlin that Harry didn't kill those men. Although I suspect that Brother Jacques has a magical family member but that's just me.
freaky bitch chapter 4 . 2/18/2012
that was realy cool! please continue :)
Lanna-Nailo chapter 4 . 2/17/2012
You should write more this is a really good story
Eve chapter 4 . 2/13/2012
Wow, what a story. But I fear that if, as you say, it is to be novel-length, at the speed you are updating, or rather: lack thereof, it will take longer than Dumbledore's lifetime to finish. Still: kudos to you, and thankees for a great read!
d4foasta chapter 4 . 2/5/2012
great work you did there. Keep it going, it's one of the very few that stick out. Thanks.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/19/2012
Hey this seems like a great story so far. It's got plenty of suspense and plot and I'm anxious to see when the Assassins come in.
GreenOnBlack chapter 4 . 1/19/2012
Wonderfully well written. Thank you!
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