|Reviews for Dormir les Morts|
| Snot of the Dragon chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
I did enjoy the story. It cute and cuddly in Holmes own creepy sort of way. However I did find one error I feel I much comment on.
In the following sentence: "He nodded sinking deeper into the covers before turning in my arms, our faces meters apart and his hand curling into my shirt."
You say the their faces are 'meters apart'. As a meter is equal to about 3 feet and you imply more then one meter is would mean that they are at minimum 6 feet and well out of touching rang. This is merely a technical error and can easily be fixed by replacing 'meters' with different units of measure that are closer. Such as feet, inches, centimeters, and millimeters.
Once again I say I did enjoy your story and thank you for sharing it with everyone.
| Tracie chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
Wonderfully poignant! Thank you!
| WrittenOnTheSubwayWalls chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
Very well done. I love how you ended it. The story had a good calm rhythm to it and the little jump at the end was the topping on the cake. It brought you back to reality, from John's sleepiness to Sherlock's insomnia.