I loved this! Had a smile on my face the entire time. Nothing like excellent banter to improve my day! :D

Excellent! You must continue! Please *gives Alice pout*

I really loved this story. I hope that you decide to add more after the contest is over. I would definitely read it.

OMG, I love this! It's SO much fun!

Showing a little bit in the pictures is so clever! I love the shoe size reference.

And I recognized the author when she used this: rhejmdfkikslhe

Thanks for writing such a cute story!

Thanks again for giving the great honor to be able to pre-rear your awesome work...

U knew how I felt thru out this whole story I was texting u after all...

But it was great to be at the edge of my seat thru out of it & fitting room phone sex CALIENTE!

Please please please keep going with this story : )

Very cute, and well-written. I feel like the swearing in the changing room scene was a bit overdone, but the rest of the story is really, really good. I'd like to see it as a chaptered piece, with more of this relationship building up!

Also, just a thought, but this really isn't a Twilight piece. You could do really well publishing this on another site where you wouldn't have to cite someone else's copyright! Honestly, change the names, and you're looking at a highly publishable piece of short fiction!

This is a delish piece. Sigh. Good luck. Really? Black Friday is next Friday? I'm in denial.

Wow! This just became one of my favorite one-shots ... EVAH!

Seriously, this was a fantastic story. Cute premise, delightful banter and buildup - very sexy interlude *wink* - and a great ending to tie it all up in a fun, festive bow.

All that said - this just BEGS a chapter 2! Really, it would make a wonderful story - I'd love to see what happens next and how they get to know each other. Who was Edward's past relationship and will that interfere at all with him and B?

Lol, sorry to go on and on! I'll add you to alerts just in case. In the meantime, thanks for writing and good luck in the contest! :D

Oh snap! Awesome O/S... must continue. LOL. Love the concept and all their banter and sexcapades. Perfect!

Hawt! Now we need Merry Sexmas! Loved it bb

OMG THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME! Sorry just had to let that out. The bestest story ever, I can visualize what is going on. I could see it as a scene in a movie. It was so good, I sent a link to my friend, who doesn't Twilight but loved this story.

I LOVED IT! :~) Thanks for sharing with us.

Holy crap you need to continue this story. This was so awesome but it really left me wanting more. PLEASE!

Wow! So sweet and romantic - AND so hot! Loved your little O/S. Thanks for writing!

I'm a die-hard slash fan, but this was pretty awesome! It had me laughing the whole time and I was actually pretty impressed with Bella- great job!