i want to know what happens after breakfast

Funny, clever, entertaining, and very well thought out! Great one-shot!

Super one shot, I absolutely loved it. Thought the phone sex was hot and the texting was just a great build up to it. I didn't want it to end. x

Good god this was fucking hot. I break a little inside that this is just a one shot. The texting convo was great. Loved everything about this, so much so I feel the need to read this shit again. Genius!

Hey :) I really, really liked this one :) Made me smile and melt into romatic puddle :)

jesus christ woman, it was amazing! i LOOOOOVE it! :D

great job, thank you. now, i have to go shopping... :P

I really love this story. The way she wrote it it makes you feel like your bella. I hope she write more to this. Need to find out what goes on next

I LOVED this one shot, girl! The way they met was so unusual, but it was awesome.

Loved how they exchanged pictures & the dressing room phone sex was so HOT.

Their 1st meeting was very realistic & I loved how you described their 1st kiss (and the hot one against the wall,too). *swoon*

I didn't want it to end! Great job! Hope you do well in the contest. :)

SO GOOD! Would love another chapter or two but spectacular and GREAT JOB.

Omg! I love this! Gosh that was freakin' amazing I can barely form any words. Gosh I wish this wasn't just a one shout cause HOT damn this would be one hell of a story if you could make it a mini story. Ahh! I just love this!

Wow, that was awesome! So hot and a great read. I'm almost tempted to go shopping :)

loved your story. would be great to see it continued :)

LOVED IT!

I love it..

it's common happen in my place but it's more interesting...

LMAO! This story was great! Do you know my sorority sisters and I actually got busted trying on lingerie in a dressing room and taking pictures of ourselves? (this was at Victoria's Secret) The sales associate actually told us we weren't allowed to do it, can't remember the reason she gave, but that's exactly what I remembered when I read about Bella taking pics of herself in lingerie in the dressing room. LOL. Classic!