I freaking adored this story! Such an original idea and wonderfully written. Did this actually happen to you? Boy that Bella's one lucky bitch. Can you imagine being in this chance occurrence and hitting the jackpot with Edward Cullen?

seriously, this makes my top 3 best one shots. such an original and amazing story. your awesome

Beautiful! I really liked the story!

I loved. One of the best stories Ive ever read!

It was sweet, funny and sexy. Im in love with this one-shot

Congrats!

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very cute.

love the story. i hope u right more PLZ! don't make this a one shot, you've got me hooked lol :)

Hope you expand this story

This was great! Sexy, sweet & just an awesome read. Is there any chance you'll be expanding it as more than a O/S? I'd love to find out what happens over pancakes!

Ioved loved loved it. Please consider doing a full story on it? It was wonderful and different and believe me I have read enough fanfic to have seen them all. Xxx

great story, but what happens over pancakes?

This was wonderful! It had me smiling and giggling the whole time! Continue? Pleaseeeee?

That was just AMAZING! The texting so funny and sexy at the same time, I loved it!

Are you thinking of writting more chapters? Please;) I would love to read like the first date between them and more Thank you for this amazing story!

OMFG I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS SHORT STORY YOU HAVE TO TURN THIS INTO A SHORT BOOK LIKE 3 MORE CHAPTERS! YOU HAD ME SQUEALING LIKE A SCHOOLGIRL! HAHAHA

ADFLJASDLFJWEIOJFo; THAT IS HOW THAT MADE ME FEEL LOL XOXOXO!

i have been a very good girl this year... can my xmas present be you continuing this wonderful story? i f*cking love it sooooo much, amazing fantastic job!

um wow, hot and steamy, yet romantic. amazing story.