|Reviews for Being Human|
| bearlee-there chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
Bookended (no such word, I know) by the same phrase with exactly opposite meanings. Quite brilliant, my dear.
I'd quote the words that make my heart clutch in my chest with their beauty but that would be almost all of them. Oh, WTH...
"...the rush of hot blood tinged with fear blooming in his mouth."
"...a shadow over her bed and her dreams."
"...the wounded-bird fluttering of her heart..."
| Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
Nicely done. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side.
| Daydreamblvr6 chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
This is really good! Very insightful and beautiful. Love the word choice "blooming" in the second paragraph-ish thing. :) Please write more fanfics for this fandom.
| Bee03 chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
OMG! Are you seriously writing Vampire Diaries fanfiction now? I love you even more hon! As per usual this was beautiful and no, there were no gaping holes. So no need to worry about that. I actually I recently took the plunge into Vampire Diaries as well and now I'm totally hooked so this was lovely to see, particularly since it's from a writer I respect. The show only gets better, by the way, from Friday Night Bites, I think you'll enjoy it...anyway, wow I'm rambling. This was an excellent addition to your portfolio and I'm diggin' the TVD fandom. Wonderful!