Reviews for Submission King
lameduck987 chapter 1 . 8/14
The ending with the kami crap completely ruined it
Light 'Kira' Yagami chapter 2 . 8/9
hahahaha that ,Madara bit was wonderful.
Navyson2001 chapter 7 . 7/25
so i found this because it was a humor based naruto fic and i will admit i was nowhere near disappointed. i loved reading the whole thing and i (unfortunately) fell off my bed laughing at some of them. the new inner sakura and the rectum cancer were both hilarious especially the crush sasuke has on neji. keep up the funny work.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24
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Guest chapter 7 . 6/12
Why is there no more :( I really like this story and I'd love to see more
Faery66 chapter 7 . 2/6
Hope to read more soon.

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Guest chapter 7 . 1/31
when both temari and sakrua get to be Naruto hot woanm and then he took ion and tenten too when in the whirlpool couny now Naruto in commed of it and had some others no his own payrool too .
Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 6 . 1/27
you havent touched this fic in almost 6 years. i know there is very little chance of this happening, still i need to ask. UPDATE THIS PLEASE!

with Mike gone and on Ficwad this is one of the only methods i have for reading a fic with this doujutsu and this brand of hilarity and smutty goodness.

Mike himself hasnt touched Harem Doujutsu in years, and to be honest it sucks. (the non update part, the fic itself is awesome) so i am HOPING that maybe the indicator that some of your fans still read your older works and wish to see them completed, will be enough to spark some inspiration and get this, and maybe some of your other incomplete fics, finished.
my 2 guys chapter 7 . 1/24
that was good keep the chapters coming
christopherrhaydon chapter 7 . 1/21
Update ASAP:)!
nitewolf423 chapter 7 . 1/4
Awsome please continues
xiaomaome101Gmail.com chapter 1 . 12/3/2016
damn... this is some of the hottest smut ive ever read. shame u lost interest. you were gifted.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/25/2016
I really wish you'd continue this story, it's fun!
Guest chapter 7 . 11/6/2016
when both temari and sakrua get to be Naruto hot woanm and then he took ion and tenten too when in the whirlpool couny now Naruto in commed of it and had some others no his own payrool too .
gabeclone chapter 7 . 10/23/2016
You're like the Ed Wood of writers...
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