Reviews for Sins of the Future
Pipe DReam chapter 1 . 10/20
Jesus Christ that was intense
and exactly what I'd want from the conclusion to that dark story arc
LadyCapuccino chapter 1 . 1/21
awesome! this is what I'd like to see in khr! I understand that Xanxus and Enma could be spared - the former is the son of the Ninth; the latter is the last descedent of a wronged-friend of Giotto and a powerful ally with the Earth Flames; but Byakuran... it's so illogical that they would allow him to wander free... I remember at the end of the Future Arc Amano showed him under survaillance from the mafia (prob Vongola) and then he was free to do what he liked? Like? And Uni was his bff!? That's why I used to hated both Byakuran and Uni back in the days. Those... assfucks!
Conanfan15 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
This was very well thought out, and the emotions reached me perfectly. I honestly think that is the way things would have gone if KHR had been aiming for a realistic edge.

Gokudera was spot-on, and everything was written out in a wonderful style. The short paragraph at the end did well to accentuate the inhuman decisions taken by the Mafia.

Thank you very much for writing this,
calliopechild chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Oh geez, this was dark. Really well-written, but *dark*. You did a great job with all the guys, though, especially Byakuran and Tsuna; Byakuran's mental torture was absolutely spot-on, as was Tsuna's reaction. And Yamamoto and Gokudera were their awesome selves too. Great job.
XxXStarxDustXxX chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
This was an amazing story. I really like how you wrote this. I love how the emotions were displayed in every character, especially Gokudera and Tsuna. Even though Byakuran didn't have his powers, he was still able to hurt Tsuna and Gokudera with his words. Anyway, this story was complete awesomesauce, and I love it a lot.
cursedlonelyheart chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
Great fic! I love the details, especially Byakuran's disregard on his own life or freedom. That's just like him~~

I love the Gokudera POV! simply because I'm addicted to Gokudera, and because you used it so well! Thanks for this great fic
Reidluver chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
Very well done, and I'm not complaining that there was a bit of a focus on Gokudera. :) I completely agree with you that the poor guy had the most problems with angst. As horrible as it is, you did a great job having Byakuran torture Tsuna without touching him. Very well done.

And I have a question-this is just a oneshot, right? I just wanted to check because it isn't marked as Complete.