Reviews for Shattered
BelovedSlayer chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
Poor Angel. I'd imagined this would be his exact reaction if Joss had added it to the episode. Good one shot.
descentofthedoppelganger chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
This was amazing!

You captured Angel's emotions so well. I can totally see him thinking and feeling all of this.


I really like this line,

"It was Gunn who seemed to understand. Angel wasn't stoic. He was paralyzed."

It seemed like exactly how it would have played out, like Gunn would be the on to suspect.

Hope to see more.
Love-el-ly Joy chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
:'-( Sadness. This was way too awesome. it made me sad.
ashes at midnight chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
i really liked this actually, all the emotions and reactions from all of them were spot on. The only thing, it isn't from Angel's pov, you've still got it in 3rd. If it was Angel's pov the first ling would be "I walked into the Hyperion..." not "Angel walked into the Hyperion." So maybe just go back at fiz that up. Same with the last bit, and all the other times you mention Angel by name. :)