|Reviews for Lust of War|
| Lioness Deity chapter 4 . 11/26/2013
Ok first off. I went deeper in how you did this story. A It's Spelled Sekhmet
B) Anubis is a Jackel
C) I'm pretty sure Sekhmet wears red, not green.
| Mr.Bubbles chapter 7 . 6/19/2013
I like it you should make a sequel when Osiris takes the throne cause in later mythology he does an you should make it Anubis and anput cause anput is a female version of anubis
| xentrya chapter 7 . 11/12/2012
You should definitely write a sequel...One tiny observation: in my opinion Ares is way too gentle and loving...I'm not saying he doesn't have a sweet side that he shows from time to time but his is a bit too candy sweet, you know? And the fact that they ended up together in some sort of marriage was a bit weird given the fact that the overall story line leaves rather the impression that it's all about sex and maybe some degree of sentimental involvement but not necessarily pure, overwhelming love...
Anyway , thank you for the story, it was a pleasure to read, I absolutely loved the characters and the plot-also the descriptions-and I definitely appreciate the fact that you took your time writing about the Egyptian Pantheon it was a nice change given the fact that almost all the shows are focused on Greek or Roman Gods...So...when's that sequel coming up I'm quite anxious to see what happens next...?
| xentrya chapter 6 . 11/12/2012
So sweet Ares defending his beloved...I must say I'm impressed, coming from him:) With Ra in the picture now I think they're in trouble though...Isoooooo hope you have a happy ending for this story:)
| xentrya chapter 5 . 11/12/2012
Gods I love Aphrodite, she's so crazy! I like the way in which you portray he. Every time I wrote about her I always described her as being ditsy, silly but loving and kind hearted but you actually managed to bring out her professional side in a rather funny way, I could actually see Ares' face when she asked about him and Sekemet having sex:)) Awesome chapter:)
| xentrya chapter 4 . 11/12/2012
Damn! I can't believe he didn't feel it wasn't her! He was a God! He might have sensed it in her aura or something, I don't know...On the other hand he was obviously too outraged to feel anything else...
Three men...Hathor was a bad bad girl...:))
| xentrya chapter 3 . 11/12/2012
Wow! This chapter was great! I love the tension that you managed to create there! Anubis did deserve a punch in the nose though. Gods I hate him- which is a very good thing; you managed to create a very despicable character, that's amazing...And the so called alliance between him and Hathor...I could bet it wouldn't end well given the Goddess' nasty temper...
I can't belive I'm actually enjoying reading about Ares and another woman:)) That's a first for me...
| xentrya chapter 2 . 11/12/2012
:)) Hathor's pink robe and cleavage reminds me so much of Aphrodite:))
I can't help wondering if Sekmet is in love with Ares or it's just business between them. I must say you had me laughing hysterically at Ra's line : "My darling daughter, continue your vigorous work " :)) She did work a lot that's for sure:))
Anubis will be up to something soon, I can smell it:)
| xentrya chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Omg! Ares with someone who is not Xena...I'm telling you this is hard to accept, but you did manage to make me curious about this Sekmet...I mean she does seem the type of woman that Ares would be interested in, but how did she get to be with him and what are they up to besides sex and enjoying the good life? I can't wait to read to rest so let's check out chapter 2...:)
| Dr. Gavel HD chapter 7 . 1/26/2012
Please continue, this is getting good.
| FlashFreeze chapter 4 . 1/23/2011
wow this is amazing. Best Egyptian Mythology fanfic i have read. I'm not even proud of mine because it - like most- is very losely Egyptian Mythology. Yours is all the way. My only complaint is how you call the goddesses gods otherwise, perfect. I love all their portrayals, very nice. It's absolutely wonderful! Props to you in this excellent piece of work! I hope you continue! You made Egyptian Mythology actually worth visiting! Thank you for this refreshing work!
| descendantcelo chapter 3 . 1/3/2011
one word more
| blood right chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
i really love this story ares,and sekmetc falling in love very good
| Demoneyed Reader chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
Intresting start, to what could be an intresting story... Wonder how twisted you are going to make it and how many hoops needed to be jumped though to surive the back lash of this event.