Reviews for UPPSIDE DOWN
kaitlynchosenisme chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
interesting. i'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. I wonder how Aine and Zuki are going to interact? :)
-Kate
mimi chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Come on please update I really like the story so far even though it is only 1 chapter.
cacoethesadoxography chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Hi! I absolutely loved this idea! I can't wait to see how it will all turn out! I must agree with you, it was super short! But the cliff hanger you left there and the overall feelings that were emitting from this story is truly incredible. Alluring and shifting, i couldn't ask for anything better! Hardly any spelling mistakes, try working on your vocabulary to find new and interesting words that you can use. Make a habit of immediately searching up the definitions of words you don't understand. This will help you a bunch when creating good stories and characters. Developing a character might be hard at first but it will soon just come to you, naturally, at least for me it did. Reading many different types of books daily and noting the different concepts used to write each story will also help you, gaining you many new perspectives and ideas that you can use. But don't rely solely on their ideas, use your own imagination too! Be creative and outstanding, it doesn't really matter what your readers think, in the end it's up to you, since i'm contradicting myself here i'll just add this in for my sake as well as everybody else's opinions. Because opinions DO matter and should be respected at all times, the feedback and reviews posted here aren't to criticize you but to help you and give you new inspiration that you might use for future reference. Writing styles may differ from writer to writer and so you must find the one that suits you best. Everybody is different and i know that, so you must find different ways to improve that will work for YOU, not me. So that's all for now! Good luck and happy writing! :D