|Reviews for Dragon Puncher's Big Beyblade Battle|
| Drake Zeppeli chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Hi there, I have nothing to criticize about this fic. However, you have suffered a worst case of the Gary Stu virus. Let me cure you by politely asking you to re-do Dragon Puncher. Make sure he does not:
Have everyone worship him like he's god. Why? This OC is nothing compared to God. Make sure God is his Authority, Father, and Mentor. How? Make God stronger than him, have DP ask God to forgive his sins, and have DP submit to God as He is stronger than DP.
Have a "nice" day.
Drake Saegsopon G4
Moderator of Pen to Paper
| Cyber Pegasus chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
you were unclear to me which beyblades are you talking about the old ones or the new metal fusion ones