Reviews for Piano
El-Cid-The-Champion chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
TOO SHORT

So what that's it?

No description of how the Valiants caught up to the criminal?

No chase scene that gets them to where the guy is cornered?

What about a scene afterwards where the villan taunts Eddie with his high squeaky voice?

I think you could have fleshed this out a bit more
ShirouHokuto chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
... ooooooh, tiny but painful. Very nice!