|Reviews for Not Another Teen Statistic|
| luckystar113 chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
Okay, I'm not gonna lie... at first reading about the whole church stuff I was like 'ack!' but then I remember what it was like being in the 'youth group' and whatnot, so it kind of brought me back. And a lot of the questions you raised are exactly how I feel. I did love how right off the bat Billy was straight. He didn't cover anything up, he was honest. And I think that is something that is missed these days. So, I can dig that.
Ugh, the best friends syndrome. They can tell each other everything about anything except how they feel about one another. Classic. I mean, come onnnn, she went to the wedding! And then the funeral :( I admire you for doing this. Because when something like this happens to good people we do question faith and beliefs and church and all that. I'm still going through that. But it's the truth and it happens.
Okay, how mad was I at Bella for going out with Jake... for 2 years! While Edward still climbed into her bed! Oh Bella... and then Jake had to be banging some chick... poor Bella. Out with the old, in with the new bolder Bella. I like her. Getting wasted and growing confident. So finally the truth can come out. I'm glad that Edward didn't take advantage of her while she was drunk but to have a hangover and get her cherry popped, ouchie. :)
But it worked for them. So not the cliche. :) Well, as long as she doesn't get preggo.. then, well, we'd have to worry. :)
Great job by love! xoxo
| Eric's No 1 lover chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Ohhh poor Alice, what a terrible thing to happen. I'm glad that Edward waited for Bella, he deserves some happiness.
| GothicTemptress chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
"The marriage part is negotiable… the love, well…I am."
*swoons* I'm glad things worked out for them. I really enjoyed the religious aspects of this because it reminds me of my own reticence in HS to experiment. My parents were so religious (Uber-Catholics)and there were my beliefs that I assumed were my beliefs until I started questioning those beliefs...but your story reminded me of the thoughts/issues I dealt with as a teen. ;)
| trixietraci chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
Had to check out your profile after you responded to my review for Puff Paint (I was wondering who wrote that!) & the title of this one intrigued me (have I mentioned that before? lol).
Such a great one shot. It made me smile, got me teary-eyed, had me worried when I thought 'something' was gonna happen w/ Jake (haha)... loved that you made B's & E's 1st time realistic.
Love your writing!
| locaxay chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
This is such a cute story and I love it!
| TeamAllTwilight chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing
| TwilightJemS chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
| MaryElizabeth23 chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Cute baby, good luck!
| I2want2knowu chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
That was fabulous!
I just have to say that was an amazing one shot!
I loved it!
| mostly a lurker chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
I thought it was very sweet. Poor Jake, he always gets the short end of the stick in these stories, lol. I like how you wove all the disparate parts together at the end.
Good luck in the contest!
| Cherise chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Great story! Only thing is the summary. I couldn't help laughing at it. Of course 99% of TEENAGERS lose their virginity in high school- otherwise it'd be in middle school or the first year or so of college *meaning* that there isn't much of an option.
| paralighter4ever chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
wooooooooooooooow! that's all I can say!
other words: amazing! brilliant! crazy amazing! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
| WellTrue chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
fuck,i cant believe you killed off jasper,i was gutted,and then nearly threw up on my laptop when she started seeing jacob,i had to actually go back and check it was an edward and bella story as my lappie would of been ruined if it turned out to be a bella/jacob pairing.(as if)
happy they both turned out to be virgins,and it went pretty well for their first time,lets hope they get a lot more practise in before they get married in the future.
love this story oxo
| jansails chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
It took Edward awhile to straighten himself out, & Bella was blindsided by the deceitful Jake.
But, All's Well That Ends Well!
| tracylk chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
you took a very delicate subject and made it beautiful. i appreciate your story very much! thanks for sharing it with us :)