Again I totally agree with your note at the beginning of this chapter. It is as if the worlds fallen into the gutter and can't fish itself out. Thank you for writing another 100 theme story. I love you work so much.

wHEN I was watching the anime, I was shock Christmas was his mother! but thank goodness it was only his adopted. now i feel sorry Roy was adopted..he never saw his real family.. :'(

yup, Ed should know about this. This chapter sounds like it's off-set or deleted scenes from the , if it were :P great job!

hey Griselda!

Wow! you finally have another story up! and i'm quite SURPRISE it's a Roy and Ed fic. I thought it was a romance fic. SERIOUSLY! but thank goodness you explained it's not (my heart's relieved).

I like you're fics and bookworm 393 because you're the only ones who write non yaoi fics. how can people come up with yaoi in the first place between Roy and Ed? UGH! it's so sick!

Great chappie! first chapter! it was Roy's fault, right? if he didn't tease Ed, none of it would happen. correct me if i;m wrong xD

Interesting, I liked that last chapter :) I wish the author of fullmetal alchemist had explained more or done a backstory on Roy's somewhat patchwork family, I feel like that would have been really interesting to find out how they all came together :P

I am absolutely loving this so far.

By mere virtue of your catching that complicity Mustang seems to establish with those closest to him, you have firmly set this on my hitlist of ones to watch. Your writing is so solid, grounded and fun - I'm hooked.

Thank you, thank you for beginning something with my favourite flamey!

M

I like these cute little stories that don't go over the top with OOC parentalness. 3

*claps* Yea, I figured Ed needed to know. This would be how it would happen, too.

Ahhh,bonding.

And that, little Ed is the real non smirking(sometimes) Roy mustang. This was all so in character and really good.

I've always loved Christmas, I'm glad you put her in the story! :D Edward needs to stop jumping to conclusions, that silly boy :)

this one was nice! i liked it! its only the second chapter, but its my favorite already!

I don't think you could have written those last two lines any more perfectly then you did. That is Ed and Mustang in a nutshell, and it's such a beautifully complex and inspiring thing. Your first prompt is a winner and I am thussly intrigued and encouraged to see 99 more chapters about them. I'm with you, they have one of the most interesting relationships in FMA and I can't wait to see where you take it. D

this is pretty awesome! i like it!

(I hate this site at the moment. I lost my reveiw again. At least I hacn't wrtten as much this time.)

I didn't know you had started this~~ Yeeeey!

I agree with everything! Oh, well, maybe not that yaoi is disgusting, because I don't know the definition of yaoi, and I've never seen or read an anime/manga that focus on it and takes it seriously.

If I had any ludicrous doubts whether I'd like this 100 themes or not, they're all vanquished. It's gonna be soooooo gooooood! Oh wait, my mom's calling! BRB.

...*comes back almost three hours later*... : Well, where was I...?

My internet connection is acting funny.

*comes back yet an other hour later* : *sigh*

One good thing is that when I read it again I noticed the connection between "For not reaching out to stop Winry Rockbell when she ran, sobbing, from the room." and "YOU'RE NOT PRETTY, YOU'RE NOT CUTE, AND I WOULDN'T GO OUT WITH YOU IF I HAD TO CHOOSE BETWEEN YOU AND KING BRADLEY!". :'(

Unsurprisingly, my favortire lines were the two last. But also "Devoid of oxygen, tightened with lactic acid, they still ached and they were stupid.", he sounded like such a kid; a heavy-hearted kid.

This is just so very much everything I could want from this fic-collection. I simply cannot wait to read more. I usually don't say this to people, frankly, I think it's rude, but please update soon? :3

Here we go again! :D :D :D