|Reviews for Conversations|
| braxy29 chapter 14 . 3/16/2012
hm, found this chapter with the wheel imagery very interesting. thank you.
| braxy29 chapter 5 . 3/16/2012
ha! shep's impression of TIM is hilarious :)
| braxy29 chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
okay, read your kolyat fic, and now i'm started on this. how are you SO good at dialoge? i have such a hard time with actual conversations, and you really have it down. enjoying your writing. :)
| stwu chapter 22 . 9/11/2011
I really enjoyed this story. I love the conversations between Ellen and Thane. You did a great job with Thane he sounds very true to character. And as for deserts, well... I was born and raised in Bakersfield and I loved it. Looking forward to reading more of your works.3
| Emantsal chapter 33 . 12/31/2010
My reviews usually suck at constructive criticism. I can't criticize. I think it goes against my basic makeup. Of course there's nothing here to criticize - It's all amazingly great! I have so enjoyed this storyline and I am sad to see it coming to a close. Oh well, that just means you have to create an entirely new story to entertain us with. And yes, I agree with Matryfae, the Farewell Normandy chapters really could stand on their own. I don't have that DLC yet, but live it through the people who write about it.
Again, a wonderful job with the storyline. Please continue to write more.
| Matyrfae chapter 33 . 12/30/2010
Another brilliant chapter...and I am sad to see this story come to a close...I love your Shep and Thane!
A Grunt related chapter does sound interesting though...
In my humble opinion I think the Farewell Normandy chapters can stand on their own...if it were just two or three chapters long I could see it as a part of this fanfic but considering the length it's a story itself, and a very good one at that.
I've really enjoyed this fanfic...I don't know what else to say about it. This is a wamazing story and I'll say it again I love your Shep and Thane's relationship, I love how you write them. I understand it has to end...but I am still sad to see this complete, it always made my day whenever I got the update email.
Anyway, beautifully done :)
| DeletedxxAccount chapter 32 . 12/29/2010
I absolutely love this story! :D I don't review a lot, but this story is PAINFULLY under-loved. I find your interpretation of Thane really interesting and damn near flawless, and you've been the only person yet to write a Renegade-first Shepard (what with killing the rachni/Council and all) that I don't hate. You're a very talented writer, and I really want to see more of Thane and Ellen.
I'd also like to call attention to your seemingly flawless proof-reading. Not enough writers on FFdN have editorial standards as high as you appear to. I haven't witnessed a single grammar/spelling mistake in the entire narrative thus far, and that's rather impressive. :)
| TheMedicoreEmployee chapter 3 . 12/16/2010
Ahhh...Bakersfield. Yup. Sounds like you understand this "desert".
I don't live so close to here, but everyone within and hour pretty much treats it with the same disdainfulness. xD
| Siha Shap chapter 21 . 12/13/2010
Brilliant! I giggled the whole way through this chapter. Humour has to be the most difficult genre to write well. You nailed it... especially Kasumi and Tali's "voices". Well done.
| Matyrfae chapter 16 . 12/8/2010
Alright, I've made a decision...this is my favorite of the chapters you have written so far...yup, this is the one :)
| Just Some Fellow chapter 14 . 12/7/2010
Have I told you I love your Shepard? Renegonaparagade adorable that she is. At first I was reading these for your takes on all of the various missions, but now I'm really interested in her background and her character. I also love the Jacob/Thane bits you throw in. I kept hoping they'd have a fight like Miranda/Jack and Tali/Legion, but I guess Thane would have just turned around and walked away before it began. Can't wait to see what's next
| Michole chapter 14 . 12/6/2010
That's weird, I thought I had reviewed before now. D:
"Just think of the zipper." Oh jeez, that made me lol.
Another great chapter! Thanks for the quick updates and keep up the good work! :D
| Matyrfae chapter 13 . 12/5/2010
I just have one thing to say to this: Nawwws! . This was a lovely chapter to wake up to :)
| Matyrfae chapter 12 . 12/4/2010
Have I said how much I love your Shepard yet? Well I do... :D
| Liny-chan chapter 10 . 12/1/2010
I love it! 3
Ah! I can't wait to read more from you! ;D