|Reviews for For the Love of Domination|
| CharlotteCrandal chapter 6 . 3/3
I must, as a person who worked at our city schools, make an observation. I see that you have a bit of a problem with some homonyms. Let me give you a hint. "There" is a location (The tree is over there). "Their" is a pronoun denoting ownership (It is their car.) "They're" is a contraction of the words "They are" (They're speaking to Bella.)
I'm aware that this is a completed story, and it is too late to go through the whole thing and correct this, as many times as you have written them, but perhaps it will help you in your future writing.
| TheChosenOne chapter 5 . 3/1
That little-Edward proposal was just too darn adorable to resist writing a quick chapter review! Bravo!
| Love1066 chapter 29 . 2/22
| bobbysgirl1976 chapter 1 . 2/18
PLEASE! CUM BACK SOON! I MISS YOUR STORY.
| Guest chapter 29 . 1/26
Um can you please please update
| chipmunk742 chapter 29 . 12/17/2013
wow very excited to see what happens next.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
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| dewa15 chapter 29 . 12/5/2013
loved the story
| FinnMac chapter 3 . 12/4/2013
Who safe worded?
| FinnMac chapter 2 . 12/3/2013
I can't wait to read what Bella and Alice cook up for Jakey.
| FinnMac chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
I'm looking forward to future chapters. (Heh, heh.)
| Skate312 chapter 2 . 12/1/2013
When will he propose?
| deisy.valdez.12 chapter 29 . 11/30/2013
The creep showed up! Great story, I will wait for next update!
| Kksmum chapter 29 . 11/23/2013
I am impatient for more. Please update asap! So many threads to tie up! I am a fan of your writing.
| MsCullenIsMe chapter 29 . 11/21/2013
And that is dear old James aka Mr. Unknown POV...?.?