|Reviews for Between the Lines|
| Fan Fictional Authoress chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Magnificent! Do continue.
| The Celestial Anachronism chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
Under normal circumstance I tend to not review something that I do not like, however, I thought I should give you a bit of constructive criticism. First off, you've miscategorized this particular piece of work. The "Modern Faerie Tales" category here on FF is for the Modern Faerie Tales series (tithe, valiant, and ironside) by Holly Black, not for skippy retellings of fairytales. There's a category for things like this, entitled "Fairy Tales" in case you want to move this piece before the administrators of the site do.
Second off, your story bounces around a lot and is difficult to get a grasp on what particular 'minor' Fairytale character/story you are focusing in on, before I realized it was Rumpelstilzchen. There isn't really a strong sense of character development, and despite the fact that you clearly state in your summary that this story is "about the side-characters of well known fairy tales" I haven't seen any recognizable side characters at all.