Reviews for Never give up! |
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![]() ![]() Has potential to be a really good story but some parts make you sound live a very naïve teenager trying to write adult fic, for instance: "Because when you got 'pregnant' we were all in Europe, besides from what I have heard from various people around town that you were with the whole damn town, and I haven't slept with you in five months even when I did I used condoms and none of them broke because I checked and when you stayed here I always slipped you the day after pill!" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG (jumping and clapping) update soon :)} |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this chapter please update soooon |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonder what tanya has told. can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story can't wait to find out what the principal wants with them |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh oh please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() hoping theres a next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WRITE MORE IT'D REALLY GOOD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you gonna update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a great story so far and i really hope you update it soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good and I can't wait to find out what rumours she's spread! |
![]() ![]() ![]() More please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter I loved it |