Omg! I'm Lovin it!

Btw

I was just wondering?

Do you need a beta?

I just set up my beta profile and nobody asked and I was wondering if you'd need any help?

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

I love your story a lot so far! When will the next chapter be up?

It's a good story, but there are some serious issues concerning grammar and capitalization. It's quite frustrating to read. I'd suggest a Beta reader.

This is really interesting so far.

I'm excited to keep reading. :)

I really enjoy this story! This is a great story lune and I really enjoy the characters and the dialouge.

awesome wonderfulilcious!

please keep writing. I really enjoyed how the cheif got tanya, she is a bitch. looking forward to reading more chapters

ooh nice love it update soon!

Love it, can you please update, it is really good, I will reccomend it to others!

Hope that all these reviews help your ego boost, I feel like that too sometimes, maybe you could read some of my stories, If you have the time, cause I know that people are buisy will school or college or stuff, so yeah.

Keep up the good work though, can you please do a chapeter on Edward proposing to Bella? It would be a hit.

I like it! Update

Hey:) I thought the first chapter was OK but i thibk you should pay more attention to grammer and putting periods and stuff where they should be.

haha loved the ending. So glad they admitted their feelings for one another Tanya really is a bitch

isn't she :P

Fran xxx

haha loved when the girls got their baseball bats out to hit Jacob. Shame they didn't get a chance to hit him :( Glad charlie wants her to keep the baby too and that she will let Billy see the baby :)

Fran xxx

Love it so far can't wait to read the next chapter and find out who carlisle hit :)

Fran xxx