Reviews for To the Ends of Time
V.Evergreen chapter 7 . 2/11/2012
Right for starters I know it's been a while since you updated this story, but don't let that put you off from icing it up again. Absolutely love everything from the fact that you chose Stephen (I like him) to the fact that you changed the story so it was cutter who went mental, overall very cleverly and well done. I don't if you plan to continue this but I'll put it on story alert just in case and I can't wait to read more from Stephens point of view and reasons as to why his wife is acting so strange,

Keep going, I absolutely love it :)
4233 chapter 7 . 2/26/2011
Really good story, enjoying loads so far. One idea I have, what if the timelines try to put themselves right, so you get ghostly images of Becker and other people, that are in the original universe, but not this one.
Nathol99 chapter 7 . 2/12/2011
What an intense chapter!

That bit about the journal being hidden in the origin of species was clever!

Loved the interaction between Helen and Sarah!

Great chapter! Update soon! :D
BrightBlues123 chapter 7 . 2/12/2011
update faster :D i want to see what happens to my fave becker!
Ruthibobs chapter 7 . 2/12/2011
stay away from tru, helen! love it, update soon please

Ruthibobs chapter 6 . 2/12/2011
ooh, I like it! can't wait for more!

AccountKiller9999 chapter 5 . 2/9/2011
I'm so happy that you updated this story, I was worried that you weren't going to continue...

So, really great chapter. Angsty but that's to be expected with a story like this!

That Helen part is a nice twist, I can't wait to see where this story goes!

Update soon! :D
Ruthibobs chapter 4 . 1/10/2011
Waah! No Becker! :( This story is really good though sad, and you have got to update quickly!

blondie134 chapter 4 . 1/4/2011
OMG you CANT leave it have to write more i am dying here lol xx
blondie134 chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Love it...cant wait for more and even thought this pair arent going to be in the new series its just more reason to post this you better update soon otherwise i will climb through my computer and out of yours and force you to write the next chapter lol xxx
KatJes chapter 4 . 12/12/2010
Wow, awesome chapter! I always thought English people would prefer writing more dialogue-centered chapters. Compared with most german stories: they write about 2000-3000 words in one chapter and about 30 chapters for one story. xD Well, you don't have this much words either, but I really like the way your playing with words. There are so cool formulations (that mostly were too difficult for me to understand without a dictionary, but who cares xD). I really could feel the pain inside of Sarah, and the chapters before I, too, was very nervous about the fact, that she couldn't find Becker. Lets say you can get the feelings across just brilliant!

I just hope you find a solution for this mess and bring Becker back, before she gets mad ..

Looking forward for the next chapter!
AccountKiller9999 chapter 4 . 12/11/2010
Awwwhhh! Poor Sarah! :'(

So glad you updated; I was worried you weren't going to contniue the story.

Great chapter and update ASAP!
Squabble chapter 4 . 12/11/2010
This is so sad :(

Poor Sarah. Then there's Stephen.

Update soon :)
Kiariad chapter 3 . 12/1/2010
/pops up out of nowhere


Basically, I have nothing of any actual use to say. It's well written and interesting and I swear I mentally went 'ooooohh' the entire way through.

The only thing I would say is that you have an odd register some of the time. As in, you use colloquial language a lot of the time and then add in phrases that make grammatical sense, but still feel a little awkward. The only thing I can really suggest here is reading it outloud. Better yet printing it off and reading it out loud.

Also, it's not 'who IN the bloody hell' just 'who the bloody hell' - the 'in' feels REALLY weird.
needtowrite chapter 3 . 11/30/2010
*gasp* AMAZING! I mean, I love Becker and all, but STEPHEN'S BACK! Although, surely that's going to be a bit creepy for Sarah? Married to someone she's never met before? Not to mention apparently carrying 'his' child. I love this! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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