Reviews for Moments
Amaurea6 chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
Your ending confused me. He doesn't love her, she doesn't care, and they both suffocate?
FoxKIT 101 chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Amazing..just..ugh if there was a better word than that I'd type it! its that alright xD

I loved this ; u;
JingYee chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
aw, I really love the last line . good job!
MarinaMayhem chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
That... was amazing.

Well done!

xcloudx chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Seelenspiel chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Great oneshot Absolutely loved the way you kept them both in character and painted such a beautiful conversation while both of them knew that their time was running out.
TornAngelWings chapter 1 . 11/21/2010

XD I'm just messing with you Lynn :D 333

I love your Yuffentine. It's amazing. But you already know that. :)

Write more Yuffentine! :D

Love, Taw!
YACCBS chapter 1 . 11/21/2010

man, i missed yuffentine.
serenbach chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
I really enjoyed this, I especially liked how the dire nature of the situation isn't clear until the end. And that last line was so wonderfully bittersweet. Loved it. :)
iryna chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Ahhh I love this so much! :D
kitsuneasika chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Maybe I'm just overly emotional today, but that last line seriously brought tears to my eyes. Oh, my heart. This is lovely.