Chapter 2 was total crap

COOL! I'm so glad you posted this second chapter in full for us to read thanks for sharing ;D

I wanted to puke when bella said...what my forever love...seriously? who the fuck says shit like that it sounds soooo stupid

and then she commited a fanfic sin...she said "no silly" god do girls really say that shit to their boyfriends? "silly" I hate that word!

This was wonderful. :) Thanks so much for sharing it. xo

Freaking phenomenal! Thank you for that. I always felt the half page of him hearing her in BD, was waaaaay too little. I believe I was so much more dissapointed in the too tiny bit of him hearing her than the infamous fade to black page. Your take is different and wonderful! Thanks for sharing your imagination with the fan-dom. -Christy

Loved your story.

What an interesting take on Bella's gift. I assume, she can still shield some of her thoughts. Great little story!

Thank you for filling in the blanks! Beautifully done. And I can't wait to read what's next. Did he bit her?

oh I loved this! I think even more than the book!

I really, really love it.

i really do like this story even though at the first part i was pretty sure it was going to end badly but i also liked the fact that they had a baby in the original anyway really good story

yours truly, vampgirl1600

Great little story. More realistic than his canon iron control.

That was great! Totally awesome and so romantic! Loved it!

Heheh... loved this.

Wowza - what a honeymoon... so I guess vampire seed can change ya too... lol