I loved it!

Ok I'm glad I'm not the only one who has had this idea before! I thought i was the only person who thought Bella would be changed as soon as she and Edward had sex! That was how I imagined it before the book came out at least so I'm glad someone else had similar thoughts! :)

Yours truly,

Amelia Bedelia

Carlisle had an interesting theory. I enjoyed this verson of Bella's transformation! Thanks for sharing it.

I just loved your story! And I have to admit, the first time I thought about what they were doing in breaking dawn, I wondered why she didn't experience the transformation after their first night together. I mean there are always tears inside the woman during intercourse, and espcially the first time, and if every fluid he has is venom filled...then it's only logical. Anyway, you made something so technical, beautiful. Just a beautiful love story!

Romantic ! Loved Carlisle too

Reb

Loved it thanks for sharing this with us...

I'm so glad you shared! I liked the way you had Bella's thoughts appear in Edward's head as words on a blackboard...

Oh, thank you...great follow up and completion of such a kick ass story! YOU ROCK!

That was really good!

loved it!

That was really good. Enjoyed every word. Liked your characters a lot. Do believe part of it was plotted between Bella and Alice so Edward would bite her on their wedding night. That it would have happened anyway is great. This is what Bella has wanted from when they met. So did Edward if he'd let himself believe. This is the way I'd have preferred the honeymoon to go. Would have been a lot more fun, lol.

Very good. Enjoyed it immensely.

Awe! So sweet! I figured she'd jump him as soon as she woke up and he wouldn't know what to do...LOL! Very good!

Very nice wrap up!

Thanks for sharing.

Kathie

great fic :)