wow this story is creepy but beautiful. i wish you will write more. thanks

oh my. so sad and eerie. I love that these two found each other & feel such love and security within the relationship. But i'm VERY unnerved by all the SIGNS. *shiver*

Wow. Don't know what else to say..just wow.

Thank the Lord. As the end was approaching I felt that something bad was going to happen so I almost stopped reading. Great story, the characters were so well developed. I wonder what happens next...

Wow, what an incredibly unique & interesting story. I'll totally admit to getting the chills a couple of times. Well done!

Thanks to conversed for recommending this.

I just finished your little story and I think it's quite epic ! But it also freaked me out a bit. See, everytime I'm at a graveyard I have a look if anyone died or was born at my birthdate. I've never found one, but you let dog-Emmett die at my birthday, May 12. As I said, freaked me out a bit.

Back to the story :) I really enjoyed reading it. It's well written (like all of your stuff) and I really liked the characters. So now I'll just read more of your stories ;)

All the best from Germany

I did it! I read some E&E lovin' with an Emmett POV. LOL! Actually, I read it last night, but my stubborn cell phone wouldn't let me review. It's working now.

The opening sequence was visually and emotionally stunning with him working on the headstone, explaining why he engraves in the order he does, etc.

I look forward to reading more of your stories because you really do have a gift for writing.

XO

I should have done this earlier...

Thank you for writing such a beautifully tragic and preciously painful story. it hurt me just right.

i love this aspect of emmett...i adore emmett too, and i really enjoyed this side of him. i love him brass, crass, and ass...but i truly enjoyed him tender, needy and vulnerable.

i want more of this emmett...

xo

This is the work of a fucking genius. JS

It would have been rediclous if anyone else had tried this idea. You sealed it perfectly! Love.

Thanks for sharing your lovely story. Angsty and powerful. Your narrative was beautiful, your characters dripping with love and desperation to help each other, though in completely different ways. Great story telling. Thanks much.

This is incredibly powerful and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Edward's downward spiral was chilling in its desperation and the ending left me questioning so many things, just like Emmett. Fantastic. I loved it!

This was so beautifully heartbreaking. I really felt Edward's fear and Emmett's sadness for him, the emotions really leapt off of the page. Very well done.

That was kind of a creepy way to end the story. I loved the angst of this one. I just want to hug this Edward and make his years go away. Your Emmett is so sweet and despite his position, really cares for those in his life (even the dead ones). It was an odd story but it was certainly unique and was well written. Thanks for sharing. There aren't enough good E/Em stories out there.

I knew it was going to turn out to be a dog! I knew it! See, I can see the future! Haha, just kidding.

Great story, I loved it.

Best story I've read in a while.

:)