|Reviews for Becoming a Man Among Men|
| Rakaan chapter 12 . 8/13
How easy is it for random strangers to just..hang around their fucking house and not get caught?
| Guest chapter 48 . 8/8
To be perfectly honest, I don't often read Author's notes. I ended up reading the one for this chapter on a whim. I agree with your frustration and irritation. People who hide under anonymity to diss others piss me off. This particular example is frustrating to me personally, because I don't have an account on this website because I love to read and am not much of a writer. So when authors who don't want to deal with anonymous reviews block said reviews, then people like me cannot leave reviews as well.
Don't let jerks keep you down. Keep on writing and doing what you believe in. I'm really enjoying reading your story and hope you continue it.
Should you choose to reply, my name is Carissa and my email is carissahatton26 gmail. com.
P.S. (I'd appreciate it if you didn't give my email away please. No offense meant.)
| sonicboomboy chapter 48 . 8/5
Gets better and better
| Guest chapter 48 . 7/30
This is freaking AWESOME! And I'm not into the Ranma fandom that much. Read this entire fic in one day.️
| Screaming Dean chapter 48 . 7/21
I'm happy to see you're doing so well. Keep up the good work.
| Guest chapter 48 . 7/16
I love this story. Come back and finish it please.
Now the critique.
Like a lot of writers you don't use the correct word (using was instead of were - lost instead of loss - past instead of passed).
Inconsistent or improper use (when a scene takes place indoors use floor instead of ground, this is a continuity thing ).
Also if English is your second language make sure your prereader/s are native English speakers.
I would volunteer but I currently do not have a functional email address.
| TheEternalCalm chapter 27 . 7/17
You typed NARUTO in this...LOL
| 1sunfun chapter 48 . 7/4
A really interesting Story.
I dont remember how I came to read your Story, but I was hooked, even if I had never before heared of Ranma.
Your characterisation is really good.
| thepkrmgc chapter 24 . 6/29
the nerima wrecking crew is destructive enough without pyrokenisis: theres no way this can end well
| thepkrmgc chapter 23 . 6/29
while i doubt ranma will win the whole tournement, the styles he learns from it should be invaluable
| thepkrmgc chapter 22 . 6/29
hopefully happosai will act his age rather then his size, though thats unlikely to say the least
| thepkrmgc chapter 21 . 6/29
well at least shampoo's honest about her intentions, even if she had to use the cluehammmer 40k so ranma would notice
| thepkrmgc chapter 20 . 6/29
akane's jealosy is undenaible, as is the fact that she would rather complain about the faults of others rather than work on mitigating her own
| thepkrmgc chapter 18 . 6/29
oh dear, hopefully there wont be too much collateral damage when shampoo and kodachi come to blows, its too much to hope that the cold war will stay cold
| thepkrmgc chapter 17 . 6/29
its good that ranma seems to understand that part of being an adult man means not worrying about doing "girlish" things,