|Reviews for Paresthesia|
| ILoveMrGeorgeWeasley chapter 8 . 8/6/2011
THat was really good I just found it and I'm happy I did and the happy ending was good too :)
| mycrookedsmile chapter 8 . 6/11/2011
*tears up* it's over! Totally heart clenchy at her going to see the Cullens. gah.
*whispers* outtake of Bella/Riley sexing!
| mycrookedsmile chapter 7 . 5/24/2011
woah. very eager to see how it all ties up in the epi.
It's frustrating that Aro couldn't see that Chelsea was doing what she did because it gave her a feeling of power. I don't think he'd really have stood for it if he weren't also under her influence.
I have no guesses as to who incinerated Afton & Chelsea. I hope it won't cause Bella trouble.
| otakuchbs chapter 7 . 5/23/2011
I love stories in volterra. Great story can't wait to read the next chapter!
| arrr chapter 7 . 5/23/2011
Interesting chapter - wasn't sure how that was going down - apt title!
| mycrookedsmile chapter 6 . 5/16/2011
um. Holy shit! Huh. wonder what Chelsea's goal was. Poor Bella- to be betrayed by her 'friend' and to betray her friend (Ri) under someone else's manipulation.
| arrr chapter 6 . 5/15/2011
Mastermind...or Puppeteer? WOW - so did not see that coming? I assume you were alluding to Jane and *cough* Alec - ewwww!
OK - first I thought she was doing it b/c she knew how B really felt about Ri - but then I wondered about the first time on a mission - I think that was not her doing - maybe every other time but not then...will have to go back and check on it.
Why would she do that to her friend? Is it really b/c of Dem?
Excellent chapter - I would rather not have the a/n at the beginning (but I guess you have to do it) b/c it would have been one hell of a shock! And, compared to a lot of stories I have read that wasn't even close to being as graphic as others...but then again I haven't read the TOS. More please?
| 01katie chapter 6 . 5/14/2011
I can't wait to read the next chapter its starting to get very interesting.
| mycrookedsmile chapter 5 . 5/9/2011
oh shit oh shit oh shit. I'm not sure who to be angry with. Demetri is such a jerk. But it takes two. sigh.
Poor Riley. I think there had to have been a way for him to hear about it from them where he wouldn't feel so betrayed, but no chance of that now.
ps, do you want folks to review here or on the other acct?
| sunshine.daiseys chapter 5 . 5/7/2011
DAMN IT !
PLEASE DONT MAKE HIM THAT MAD AT BELLA
| arrr chapter 5 . 5/7/2011
WOW - great chapter - poor B - she truly has nothing in this story - she lost E, her family (mortal and Cullen), taken to Volturi...no mate - in love with her best friend - after 70 years I think I'd walk into the fire myself. But then I guess we have Chelsea with her bonds and the resident Novocaine.
I hate the way Jane did it but I'm glad she outed them. I would want to know if I were Riley, despite the pain. Poor guy! I still think Dem is a sleazeball! Albeit a hot one :)
Again, great update - nice and long!
| arrr chapter 3 . 4/29/2011
Woah - your boy Dem is a real piece of work!
| arrr chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Very interesting chapter - the issue with the 3rd wife and E's call to her blood...clever, clever...and R realizing the truth in E's words...and Dem saving him b/c he is aesthetically pleasing - starts out well!
| The blood of the night rose chapter 4 . 4/24/2011
Please update soon! This is very good. I love it. You're a great writer.
| Sheridan Malfoy Potter chapter 4 . 3/6/2011
loving it cant wait for more updates. Ciao. xo, sheridan.