|Reviews for Forever and Ever|
| twirob chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
| laura lou who chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Damn it, that was waayyy too sweet.
I could feel Edwards disappointment in my chest when he came to pick her up.
I remember my first time being awkward and quick like that, we were both virgins. So, that was sweet.
Since I'm on break from classes right now, I've done nothing but read twilight fanfiction and I'm coming to find your Edwards are so sweet and considerate. Its very nice.
| beachrosey chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
First time sex before the prom, now that's a new one!
| shalu chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
always beautiful, m'lady. xoxo
"I DON'T WANT YOU TO COME." hahahahahaha
| EternallyCullen chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Wow, that was fab ;-) Great stuff, I loved it.
| djsmommie chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
such a great take on the best friends
I love him showing up for Prom, she is just so blind sometimes but they just work together ;-)
| obsessedwithRobbie-P chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
| Lisa-FanFicCrazy chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Absolutely adorable! Thanks
| Kmserenity chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
So cute. I love stories where E&B were childhood friends that fall in love. Was surprised that the had sex together so soon after admitting their feelings, but it was sweet. I can totally picture a boy mumbling 'ohmygodohmygod' over and over his first time. Lol. Thanks for what you do. Enjoyed it very much.
| Marijee chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Best friends forever...Yes! Bella and Edward were always a part of each others lives. Edward submitting to peer pressure at age nine, pushing Bella away...only coming back that night apologetic and sad that Bella was crying.
Age 17 and high school...gah the hormones, the insecurity, the cattiness of the girls. Silly Bella and Edward...not speaking their feelings...wanting more afraid to say it. I loved how you wrote this. The awkwardness and the vulnerability both felt.
"Something deep in her heart twisted excruciatingly, the kind of happiness and love that was so profound it hurt - like a person was never meant to feel so much. With a warm sense of connection spreading throughout her body, she wrapped her arms and her legs around him, her ankles crossing behind his thighs, pushing him deeper, and he swore harshly." I loved this! I liked how you wrote this lemon. This was new territory for Edward and Bella, but their love and their friendship got them through. I laughed with them when Bella reacted to how large Edward was and he said it wasn't the reaction he expected...yeah guys! The laughter about the box of condoms in Bella's drawer...thank you Renee! Anyway it was sweet and funny and perfect for them.
I liked how you ended it with them going to the prom as Edward had planned. Enjoyed. Thank you for writing.
| Kare831 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
I loved this story! It was absolutely adorable! I’m so glad they eventually made it to the Prom. )
| IthinkIamobsessed chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
LOVED this story! You had a GREAT built up to the moment,and I loved hearing their whole history fro when they were little! GORGEOUS sexy lemon! I loved the way you discribed thier first time, Edward was adorable! You had great explinations without it feeling dirty ) Great story! Hope you win!
| Twink423 chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Awww. I loved this fluffy little ditty! Thanks for sharing. :D
| isle.esme92 chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
I once read somewhere that "love is friedship set on fire". I think that's exactly how it should be: loving the other but on the basis of fiendship and respect 3
| nitareality chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
From the cute and clever use of the New Moon dialogue in the beginning, to the sweet but not saccharine ending, this was fabulous.
I love how human they are. I love how you weave them in, out and through classic male/female communication issues, without once touching cliche, and without making them too perfect.
I especially love the uber realistic part here:
"I mean I've done, um, some stuff. But only because they wanted to, and I was so mad and I didn't think … I thought you didn't like me like that."
That he "did stuff" because he was mad. Perfection. This is how the guys think, yes? You did this perfectly, we can't be pissy with him for it, just roll our eyes at the "guyness".