Reviews for Don't Presume to Assume
slc6548 chapter 12 . 10/14/2013
You got a good thing going here - love to see more!
GeezerWench chapter 12 . 10/13/2013
I knew it was Peter!

He saved Bela from being killed by Alice! You'd think Jasper would have done that.

Like how you had Laurent go after the oreos and then James and Victoria have a seat on the ground to watch the show.

Eager to see what you come up with next.
GeezerWench chapter 10 . 10/13/2013
Ahhhhhh...the infamous baseball game.

Alice is trying to get Bella killed now.

Peter...er, I mean SPARKLES is gonna fix it!
GeezerWench chapter 9 . 10/13/2013
Poor Charlie. Almost feel bad for him.

I like how you've characterized Emmett. Too many folks treat him like a moron.

Edward too stupid to stay away from Bella's window...HA!
GeezerWench chapter 8 . 10/13/2013
Your poem was very...interesting.

ha ha ha ha ha
GeezerWench chapter 7 . 10/13/2013
Cool. Jasper so beat Edward across the parking lot and Alice's visions are screwed up again.

Oh darn. Charlie wants Bella to hang out with the Cullens.
GeezerWench chapter 6 . 10/13/2013
Peter's gotta be setting this shit up and...

Jasper saved her!
GeezerWench chapter 5 . 10/13/2013
Yeah,I'd say Bella definitely knows something and the Cullens are figuring it out.

ha ha ha ha ha ha
GeezerWench chapter 4 . 10/13/2013
Hmmmm.

The vibrating phone and texts...Peter?

Don't tell me!
GeezerWench chapter 3 . 10/13/2013
Good. Edward can't hear her.

they went and sent Jasper away! WTH? And he went?

Detention already. ha ha ha ha ha
GeezerWench chapter 2 . 10/13/2013
Cinder-fuckin'-Bella

Good one!

baste his boxers!

LOL

Um...I did not read ahead. I didn't cheat and read reviews.

Is Sexy Sis Charlotte?

Don't tell me!

Pretty good introduction to Bella here.
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
You clearly posted who's point of view belonged to who, and that really helps.

Yay! There's a glitch in Alice's visions already.

Edward! Jesus H. Christ.

All righty, Jazz. Hope on that Bella train!

I like her already.
Guest chapter 12 . 10/13/2013
Oh, I'm so freaking happy to see an update to this awesome fic. Please, pretty f'n please update again SOON! I just love me some Jasper/Bella and yours is so original. I love the humor and how you've introduced Peter and James's coven. Can't wait to see how this develops. Congrats on your uni achievements. My oldest daughter just started college and I'm so proud. Thank you for such wonderful entertainment.
Rand0mnessR0ks chapter 12 . 10/13/2013
I see some dirt coming out soon!
Rand0mnessR0ks chapter 10 . 10/13/2013
I loved the back and forth argument, it was, the best!
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