Reviews for EO Challenge: Flatline
Beckydaspatz chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
You got me! I thought you were talking about John. GREAT drabble!

The end of Sam's world could wait a little longer.- Oh Sam *cries*

Well I better stop here cause I finally just got out of my funky mood (thanks to you) and I would hate to ruin that by reading something sad (albeit brilliant!) Til next time!

Oh and I made it to double digits YAY! OH wait I skipped some of the longer ones (for now) dammit, nevermind :P
Vanessa Sgroi chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
This was fantastic. It's one of my favorite episodes as well. Nice work!
Micaiah chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Nicely done! I like all the descriptive phrases and that's one of my fave episodes too.
MeAzrael chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Aw, again a really wonderful drabble, Dizzo - loved the first line, and then the very vivid description of all that happened in the seconds, minutes, hours (at least felt hours for Sam) after the flat line, and then the first beep - really cool. One of my favorite episodes too - and it's weird to read this from Sam's POV knowing how Dean dealt at that moment with the Reaper...

xxx Kate
Swellison chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Hi Dizzo,

Oh, intense scene here, told as almost poetry with all the "To a"'s and "To the"'s Sam's anguish, fear and hope come across vividly.

Sue
Nana56 chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Oh nice one! Set back when things actually mattered to Sam. :D *sigh* Miss those days.

Love it! :)
Amberdreams chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Oh very nicely done - like the staccato style and packed full of vivid description and emotion... Lovely!
Enkidu07 chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
*phew* I wasn't sure if you were talking about Dean or John. I was glad when the heart started. So much tension in so few words. You are a master.
moviemom44 chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
This reads almost like a poem, which is to say that you have captured buckets of emotion with a mere dribble of words. The imagery here is gripping.
LaedieDuske chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
That was...you just... *whimper* Beautiful - "honey gold chest" - "desperate prayers, Sam's prayers" - I had always watched this scene in terms of how *I* felt about losing Dean. Some sense of self-preservation kept me from thinking of it in terms of how a *sibling* would feel watching that happen. In 100 words you've managed to bring that home to me. Standing in Sam's shoes, could I watch my brother be shocked back to life? Powerful piece, really just beautiful.
Edina Clouds chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
"The end of Sam's world could wait a little longer"

Fantastic drabble sweetie - really great use of drabble word

Viv

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