Reviews for A Deal with the Head Boy
Bellanu421 chapter 17 . 11/30/2014
Oh Merlin...
I like the story, but seriously? I doubt Lily would over react on a jab at her sister; or Pettigrew was that an idiot..
Angel chapter 17 . 1/24/2013
i have fanfiction and my penname is AngelfromBeyondBelow but fanfiction won't let me log in

awesome story 3 it
dai-zychains chapter 17 . 12/12/2012
This is amazing! I loved it so much that I died so many times. James and Lily are one of my favourite shippings, I hate how you read all the stories about that with happy endings but know that they really had a tragic end, it just seems unfair and now I'm crying. Literally.

At the same time I think it might make it more special.
Thankyou for writing this
dai-zychains chapter 10 . 12/12/2012
I realised I hadn't said that when James broke Snape's nose and said that thing to Lily I texted my friend a big rant about 'da most cutest lily and james fanfic in da world' Yeah I also screamed a bit (and when they kissed) I tend to replace my the's with da's when I go into hyper mode because I put on a voice. I am not the most normal
dai-zychains chapter 9 . 12/12/2012
hahahaha I love this so so much!
I just thought I would mention (because i will admit it sort of annoyed me) that scotland is actually a part of Britain so when Aira calls them brits and they say she is just as british as the rest of them it really makes no sense at all! To be right you would need to say English rather than British...
Sorry it's just I'm half Scottish half English but full British ;)
(PS: I am the lazy bum but I finally bothered to log in!)
Guest chapter 8 . 12/12/2012
Aw. I want one. Please? It's almost christmas, maybe ill santa can get me one *Adds james to list of fictional characters I want for Christmas*

Oh and to answer your question on the last chapter I am british so... But sometimes when I read american books (which i will admit is most of them) I read them in an a cheesy american accent and i tend to read bits of the hunger games all southern aloud because it makes me laugh. I am aware that I have no life.
a lazy bum chapter 7 . 12/12/2012
Yeah I can't be bothered to log in! I love this though it is so goooood! I got to the end and I was just like 'aw'
Guest chapter 17 . 10/8/2012
OHMIGOSH! that was the best james and lily fanfiction ever! you are the most talented author, probably better than jk rowling. if you become an author i will buy every single book you write! i really liked your plot, it really flowed nicely, unlike some stories, things happened very nicely in yours! i loved your epilogue, it was so -i don't know the word for it- umm romantic, cute every adjective for amazing! i hope you have more fanfiction on james and lily :P
stars shine out chapter 7 . 7/31/2012
Oh my wizard god, that was totally awesome. Siriusly. Brilliant chapter.
Sally chapter 7 . 10/17/2011
Omg! I so totally think in a British accent when I think of anything Harry Potter related and several other books set in britain. *cough-Narnia-cough*
OnceUponAMidnight chapter 17 . 8/13/2011
Yay! That was a good story and you stopped it at a good time to . I think you are a very good writer, but you should check your writings for typos. Also some of the sentences were hard to understand, but I think those were also typos. All in all, I'd say a 9/10.
Paula Strauch Costa chapter 17 . 4/27/2011
Hey, I know I'm pretty late, but I just want to congrat you for this wonderful Fanfic! Thank you for writing it!
ForeverProngs chapter 7 . 3/22/2011
Yes, I do think in a British accent :p

Great story :) xxx
xxLEA-LEAMITCHELLxx chapter 17 . 2/1/2011
wow lol i loved that! ive been up reading it for ages when i should be sleeping, you are a great writer and the plot was amazing

L x
Dozy Dora chapter 17 . 1/30/2011
This is an amazing story and a brilliant ending! Thank you so much :D x
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