|Reviews for A Fork in the Road|
| twi nana chapter 32 . 3/10
late to the party as usual, but omg, did I L.O.V.E. this story...yep, should have been, .THIS.
I was cheering B and A and R all the way along...again L.O.V.E.D. IT!
Now, if I just figure out a way to get your other stories in epub form...oh, and I will. I belong to a few awsome face book pages...that really feed the addiction...
hugs Twi Nana
| cfigueroa78 chapter 19 . 2/12
Love this twist on NM. It's so well written and has such a great dose of humor which is nice because twilight in general was a very serious series. Emmett's letter was hysterical and I look forward to the hell he's going to give them when the family comes back. By the way, I'm learning great new words I never heard before - tally whacker, repast, etc.
| cfigueroa78 chapter 10 . 2/11
I agree with you about Emmett. Out of the whole Cullen clan, he was my favorite and should have played a bigger role. He's not one for angst, drama or bullshit. I absolutely loved his letter! "Why were you in Canada Edward? Because you started your period and went batshit crazy". That was spot on! I love Bella and Edward stories and always when they have an HEA but Edward's self loathing, sanctimonious and self-righteous crap gets old tired. While reading the series I found myself wondering what was so attractive about a man like that. One thing that was blatantly clear but sad was that Bella loved him completely as he was. Edward didn't love her the same way, his love was conditional. SM didn't stress enough that even though chronologically he was a 100 year old vampire - in reality, he was a very immature and stupid seventeen year old boy.
| cfigueroa78 chapter 3 . 2/11
I always wondered about the whole Alice not seeing that disaster coming. I was also thoroughly pissed that Alice dared to call herself Bella's best friend but left her like that. It pissed me off more when it turned out that Edward wasn't even with them when they left. Alice had no excuse to leave her best friend that way and I hated how Bella being the wet rug she was, welcomed her with open arms, no questions asked. Did she not know that her relationship with Alice wasn't true friendship?
| mamato chapter 17 . 1/12
I have a question about this chap...maybe it's answered in a future chap I haven't gotten too yet, but here it is.
If Victoria was laurent's mate, how was he able to cope without her? Why didn't he go to the ends of the earth to find her? And how in the world was he able to fall in love with irina? It kinda takes away the true meaning of what it is to be mates. I thought that gaps had only one true mate, and once they found the, that's it. Does this mean that Edward would be able to love someone else if Bella died, or he left her? I don't understand...
| abbyweyr chapter 32 . 12/14/2013
Found this in Eh Bien's favorite story list. Not at all my usual kind of story that I read. Like the names you came up with for the babies. Interesting backstory for Edward's parents. Sad with his sister and interesting that he met Carlisle then, makes a better transition than just when in hospital. Some other interesting twists.
| cela chapter 18 . 11/17/2013
five times in three days is nothing. try seven times in one night!
| cela chapter 18 . 8/17/2013
yes she could have cystitis, I did on my honeymoon and he was nowhere near as good as Edward, even if he was nineteen. the most I did was seven times in one night and I almost killed him. no, he was not my husband, but he was HOT!
| cela chapter 12 . 8/17/2013
tally whacker was also used when I was in sixth grade back in 1961. I guess that makes me really old!
| cela chapter 5 . 8/17/2013
well. she really handed him his ass! I've done that a time or two, feels great!
| disrae chapter 28 . 8/16/2013
Loved this story! Happy they had the babies, and loved that they had twins!
| Guest chapter 20 . 8/14/2013
Glad the family is back! Nervous for them to tell Charlie!
| disrae chapter 16 . 8/13/2013
Yikes! Nervous about Laurent! Really prefer your version of New Moon to the origional!
| disrae chapter 14 . 8/13/2013
So sad! Poor little girl, and poor Edward!
| disrae chapter 13 . 8/13/2013
I am loving this story! Thank you so much for writing it!