|Reviews for War Games|
| madam-du-batty chapter 6 . 3/31/2011
UPDATE! FTW :D love the new chapter and mals experiances of school but now im desperate to find out about her and dominiques daddy, and why margo killed him.
| Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 6 . 3/31/2011
Slightly confusing but interesting.
| noodlecat chapter 5 . 1/6/2011
i concour with nimbus about the use of maman and mother. awesome writing as allways this is fast becoming one of my favorite stories on . I shall spend the time between now and the next update in feverish anticipation and constructing insane theorys about Mal's parentage. :D
| Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 5 . 12/31/2010
Nice, but short, however Maman is french (kudos to you for using it though) and mother, or mum instead of mom.
| madam-du-batty chapter 4 . 12/9/2010
damn this fic is good. i just caught the last chapter and now im determined to read the rest, its brilliant. And mal being margolotta's daughter/son? genius, i love both the character and them being related has been part of my personal fannon for some time. :D
| Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 4 . 12/9/2010
Abbadon? Overkill ;). Sounds interesting, though you could have embellished the names of the kingdoms by doing them in German, with translations.
| Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 3 . 12/1/2010
The lack of reviews for this excellent story is a crime against art! Excellent.