Reviews for Amy, Love
Somebody chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
You have a few grammar mistakes and thoughts really should be italicized...and it really was too short, not to mention there is barely any plot line/story. It's mostly just dialogue. Not trying to be mean, just honest.
MiniAsianDoll chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Please update soon! :)
Hopeful Smile chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
please update!its wonderful! Please please!
Butlikeewlawlz chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
idk despite all the reviewers I thought that the first chapter was awesomtaculousness! Please update this story!
Hale chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
What's the continuation?
Kisses are Stupid chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
It's... not bad. I suggest you change the title or something. It's... just a little cliched. That's all.
Tori-Chan-Madrigal chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Yes, it was a little clich├ęd but... I think this is gonna be a good story .

Look, I really dont want to be harsh but the story will be a lot better if you try to make the chapters longer this was way tooooo short and you can fix some grammar mistakes .

I know you can make it better(not saying that this was bad but) I hope you continue .


seamussera chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Hi Sera. Guess who? I like you're story. When are you going to finish the next chapter?
DreamerGirl2245 chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
this could be good
PurpleTea88 chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Please excuse my harshness.

Your grammar needs a lot of work, as does your dialogue.

The chapter is too short and there isn't enough description.

Thoughts should be italicized.

Too much dialogue, not enough story.


PLEASE get a beta.
Rip Major chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
I can't wait for more. Update soon please.
SML chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Dan's 11 right? So wouldn't he be in 6th grade; which means he's going into middle school?;)