|Reviews for Secrets, Twists and Chaos|
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 11 . 8/13
Fun story. :)
You know, when I was in college, I was taking too many classes and had to choose between my art classes and music classes. I chose art. I felt kind of like Yuzu did there: free. :)
And you did this without swearing once. 3 THANK YOU!
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 10 . 8/13
That part about signing a petition...BEST SCENE EVER! LMHO! Kudos
| Nualie chapter 11 . 6/27/2016
Uh, that was interesting~
| Sakura Chara chapter 11 . 1/22/2016
*snicker* I LOVE what you did with Yuzu-chan~... A mini-Unohana in the making~!
On the other hand, great fic~! I was genuinely hooked the whole way, and threw a mental fit when my "get-your-butt-moving-outside-so-you-can-get-to-school" alarm rang RIGHT AS I got to this chapter~!
| kinigget chapter 11 . 12/1/2015
That was a lot more fun than I was expecting
| kinigget chapter 7 . 11/30/2015
| kinigget chapter 3 . 11/29/2015
...and now you have my attention
| travelqueen124 chapter 11 . 5/21/2015
Great story loved it. Am new to the bleachverse and am glad you left it even though are unhappy with the first chapters.
| Panda-Angel-Wings chapter 11 . 5/7/2015
Thank you for actually finishing the story because most people just don't finish. I'm glad you saw progress in your writing from before high school until after high school. It's been many years, but I hope you're doing well.
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/8/2014
That was a grate story. I know how Tatsuki turned a hollow base from your story ( well on my own way of seeing things ): Mayuri have his stupid invention affect her and it turned her into a hollow something.
| librastar chapter 11 . 8/5/2014
Wow. I read this brilliant story over the course of three days, and a huge pat on the back for actually finishing it eventhough there were big gaps in between, it would have been a crying shame if your story had gone into the unfinished pile.
Let's see - what did I like about this story? Too much to name really but most of all, characterisation was really done masterfully. The characters felt very fresh yet true to their canon selves; I loved how natural Toshiro's feelings for Karin developed over time, not overly sappy or cliched love at first sight at all. I also particularly enjoyed your writing of Matsumoto and Ichigo - both done wonderfully in character as well.
Props for also having a substantial plot and tying your story in with events in the manga; an interesting concept having Karin be a member of the Vizard. I love that you involved familiar faces such as Kyoraku and Ukitake, and used them as comic relief especially in moments where the atmosphere was getting rather tense and heavy.
To be honest , I disliked the epilogue where Yuzu quit school and became a Shinigami because I just think that Yuzu is the normal one in the family and deserves to lead a purely human life. Also not a fan of Renji/Tatsuki (I ship RenRuki) but this is really nitpicking.
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/8/2014
I had such an amazing time reading this story. No regrets even though I have finals to study for. You had me flailing around with all the feels this story gave me. Great job!
| jf chapter 11 . 1/18/2014
i enjoyed reading this!
| DeliriousDingo chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
They only played a game of soccer.
| faerybound chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
Oh my gosh, I'm sorry if tho is really late, but I was rereading this and decided to comment/review.
I love how you ended it; it was left open...
You should totally do a story on Yuzu's and Tatsuki's sides of the story. There aren't that many well written Renji/Tatsuki stories (I adore them)...
But seriously, consider writing the side stories?
I loved it!