Reviews for The Pearls Within The Sands of Time
Pale Treasures chapter 2 . 4/19/2012
HOW can this not have more reviews? It's outrageous. Your writing is nearly perfect. Your words are magical, as is the insight you have into the characters' minds. Love it. :)
Pale Treasures chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Your writing is absolutely beautiful. I'm not sure whether my jaw is going to drop or I'm going to weep with envy at the fact that English does not seem to be your first language (judging by your profile). You did a great job with portraying Griet, her thoughts and her yearning. It made me feel a little bit of the ache she feels and sympathise with her. You make a lovely use of language, almost like a painter. :)
lovelytl23 chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
This was beautiful. I enjoyed your grasp of the language and your ability to make my mind see what was happening. I felt as if I were holding the broom and listening to the genius inside. This was a fantastic book and your captured moment was perfect. Thank you for ensuring proper grammar and spelling. This will be added to my favorite stories and favorite author.