Reviews for Severance in Song
Esther Clemmens chapter 2 . 5/25/2012
The beginning was really well written. I like how Saya awakens. No one can just wake up after 30 years of sleep without a number of issues. I like how you portrayed her as being weak, there. I like how you're building the suspense. I can't wait to read more!
Ellie-Rigby64 chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
I just wanted to THANK YOU for describing Saya's time of awakening like this! A lot of stories I've read made it seem like she just woke up from an hour nap, having perfect recollection of everything, and is just perfect. And I didn't really see the Anime or the Manga portray it as that.

Great descriptions and imagery.

You portrayed exactly how I envisioned Saya's awakening PERFECTLY only much better than what I can do lol :P

On to the next chapter! :)
IluvBatman chapter 3 . 12/23/2010
This is so beautifully written. I cannot wait for more.
TheStarsAbove7 chapter 2 . 12/5/2010
Again, good chapter, I'm guessing the presence she felt was non other than the beloved Haji! YAY!

Please updated quickly~!~
TheStarsAbove7 chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
It was amazing, beautifuly written. I have nothing bad to say about it, I don't know how anyone would.

Welcome to the world of fanfiction and Blood!
Aldedron chapter 2 . 11/25/2010
Oh, yay! A new chappy already!

And you brought up so many mysterious and unanswered questions, too 0.0 Sachi seemed as though she knew the source of the presence, addressing it specifically as "him". Hm... And what's this deal with Tsuki?


Well, you're evil for having 13 chappies and not posting them, but I love suspense, so ah well

Can't wait for the upcoming chappies ;D!
Aldedron chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Well, welcome to the community ! Happy day for a new author for the fandom...

And what a beautiful story, too!

I love how you delve so deep into the descriptions, going on and on about Saya's milky skintone and contrastingly midnight locks. ...I'm obsessed with description... Onwards! So, Saya's awakened... and eaten a dog... And Haji's not there. Wonder why that is, for did she or did she not hear his cello? Perhaps that was a memory, not the actual thing. I dunno! Your story!

As for that violence and gore to come- can't wait!

Please update soon ;D
Anime-baka chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I love this story and i've only read the first chapter! Poor doggy D:! That was random but yeah I can't wait for this story to continue :)
L and misa for eternity chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Interesting it sounds good so far i hope there's more to come soon i would like to read what happends next good luck on your nexted chapter.
Falling into the darkness chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
interesting...u have a way with words...a lot better than looking forward to reading later chapters for this story...oh is this new love an old character from the oringinal story or a new person all together? well, keep writing...