Reviews for Brown to Black
sweetie21 chapter 1 . 11/8/2017
how do u always come up with such appropriate words? Heart touching story
Mazina chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
Short and sweet. Just like the buds of a great idea should be.
QueenyLeAcH chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
Awesome.
PhantomPotterGirl chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
That's really good and this makes like total sense that his eyes changed colour because of it. Niice, sorta wish if your life was really happy people's eyes turned bright too! :D
Fairy of the Flames chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
Kevin eye obsession! xD Sorry, but my first story in For the Love of Gwen literally has something like this. I liked this, but... xDDD
brandirandom21 chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
This is really great :D I don't know what you're talking about it being not as great as you hoped...
ledah13 chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
i feel what you mean

it's a little rough, more like a short draft but the concept's there. you executed the intro and ending well but lost touch with the body. i still admire this, brown to black. lovely