Reviews for Loneliness
xxxMirendaCrosgrovexxx chapter 1 . 10/14
mfers quit using seme and uke, it's gross and fetishizatory
Maza the Gainer of Knowledge chapter 6 . 12/7/2012
Heh, Not a fan of slash, but I just can't stop reading it all of a sudden! Espcially when some good parts of the story, like action! Keep going with this! I am looking foward of how the story's progress!
super.happy.fun.time chapter 6 . 4/17/2012
This is awesome Please update again soon...-
Akuma the Dark One chapter 6 . 8/26/2011
Come on I wanted more! Update now!
Akuma the Dark One chapter 5 . 8/26/2011
Uhh just to let you know it is usally the seme that marks the uke, not the other way around.
Akuma the Dark One chapter 4 . 8/26/2011
Yay story finally has some fluff. Also is Jake's sister french cause her French is a lot better than mine:P
Akuma the Dark One chapter 3 . 8/26/2011
Okay now that's creepy I had a nightmare just like Jake's four nights ago, only difference is I lived through the whole thing. It was almost as if my body refused to die.
Akuma the Dark One chapter 2 . 8/26/2011
First thing first how are you going to eat a Wind Dragon who can kill without touching their prey. Anyways on with the review loved the chapter and I'm really impressed with the story so far.:)
Akuma the Dark One chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Nice intro, a little dark for Razor but it was still good. I also like the fact that you gave this story a sence of the real world.
Manny chapter 2 . 1/20/2011
It was good, but when Jake talked to Chance's mom, it just sounds weird that two perfect strangers talk about things like that. I hope I'm being clear. It is just based on that a minor to adult conversation just would not typicaly go the way theirs did.
Cody Furlong chapter 6 . 12/20/2010
Woot! Go swat kats! The twist your giving them with the poweres are nice. The time lapses didn't seem out of place. Keep up the sweet work!
Cody Furlong chapter 5 . 12/18/2010
Awesome! Go boys! This is certainly going to be an interesying time for them. I'm looking forward to how that marks, and the whole spirt realm thing plays out.
Cody Furlong chapter 4 . 12/11/2010
Whoo! Go Chance, make that kitten yours! LOL, this was the best chapter yet! I'll be interesting to see how you handle them in the Enforcers.
Cody Furlong chapter 3 . 12/9/2010
Wow, poor Jake, that was some dream, and yay for Chance being an empath! I'm looking forward to seeing more and when the two finally get together. Keep up the great work, I don't think that dream was overboard at all.
Cody Furlong chapter 2 . 12/4/2010
Interesting, I hadn't been expecting that twist on things, quite a surprising start to this. Keep it up!
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