Reviews for The Choice
Sybille chapter 1 . 10/16/2016
This story is very sad but excellent written. I hope you continue writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
I can imagine, some years later after the defeat of Voldemort in DH, Luna approaching Lucius in a public place and saying, in her lilting, bemused voice, "I forgive you," turning, and walking away, leaving him to close his eyes and let out a very long breath. Very well done, with excellent portrayal of characters.
-EbnyLvrBryan, via mobile phone.
ANON chapter 1 . 11/11/2015
this was interesting too bad you dont have a part 2
prose.titute chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
I loved this fic. Wow. So well written without the description of rape (which yeah... is often written to sound sensual). It made me really sad. Sad for Luna, but proud of her strength. Sad for Lucius in his desperation to survive by committing crimes he would hate his own child to endure. *claps* You are amazing.
The part where he said Luna should've picked Severus broke my heart. I'm glad you didn't make Luna feel so regretful here. She is so strong. Poor Harry in the aftermath though. He would be so guilty.

I liked how you had Luna recognise Lucius. Long blond hair like hers...
Chupa chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
This is my favorite fan-fic. I love it and I wished you still wrote (I don't think you do, judging by your profile).
12ljam chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Would like to see what happens next... please please continue this and make a sequal
VenusIHH chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
I'd love to see a version where she chooses Snape! Really good :) x
queenevil666 chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Love it! I would luv to see a alt version where she chose Snape.
AsHisTreasured chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Luna is fascinating... Great job
cigarettesandlace chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
An unexpected pairing, but I absolutely loved this. Amazing, keep it up! :D
something guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Seamus,Harry,Ron,Herione should get revenge for Luna I think seamus should be in love with Luna lol please wright a sequel
Quin-Kilkziard chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Really good. Thank you for making the dub con not sexy. It seemed realistic, and Luna seemed completely in character. Really great. I hope you continue to write. I am starting to ship these two just a little bit because of this haha.
DuckieHamilton1 chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
I really want a sequel to this, you are such a good writer.
Leo chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Wah. That's Great. Really like 'your' Lucius...
Curious how a reunion would run...
queen scheherazade chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
Whoa. I really like your portrayal of Lucius. He's almost helpless, which makes him almost heartbreaking...but not quite. I love Luna's last line. It conveys her strength of character that you talked about earlier in the piece. It also really opens things up for a follow-up story... *nudgenudge*

Also, I think having someone go after Draco could be an interesting side-story. Maybe Remus just before the full moon or something?

Anyway, great fic! ]
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