Reviews for Coloring Outside the Lines |
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![]() ![]() ![]() im sorry I understand im so late to the game but seriously fuck that bitch jenna. No i dont like her omfg shes a bad as victoria. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What kind of mother would buy her first time, ugh. Great chapter ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That guy was a hoot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That surprised me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She may be young, however she eeds to understand who Bella is to Edward. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The job is really odd for him. It's a tough change . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is she talking to her like she’s 5? |
![]() ![]() "I have those sometimes.", I could hear Katie saying. Were you absent when punctuation lessons were taught?! You *never* use both periods and commas when writing dialogue. Here's the proper way to punctuate the sentence above: "I have those sometimes," I could hear Katie saying. You make this error throughout your stories. It's beyond annoying. |
![]() ![]() Jesus Christ... |
![]() ![]() Just when I thought Victoria couldn't get any worse then Jesus Christ she doubled how much I want fuckin murder her |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really great story . And i mean both of them . I really felt everything . It was wicked good . |
![]() ![]() It's Trunchbull not Trunchbowl |
![]() ![]() In most of the long fanfics I've read I just wait for the ending and count the chapters or sometimes skip it and just jump to the epilogue. But not this one, this story is marvelous and so intriguing that I am dreading the end. I don't want this to end, It's so perfect with realistic situations and conversations along with the amazing lemons. And I don't know if the author is even using FF but still I want to thank you so much Winndsinger for writing this ridiculously wonderful fanfic. |
![]() ![]() This story is so good, I can't even stop reading to finish my chores. |
![]() ![]() I don't understand why they have too kiss katie on the lips, I mean isn't it disgusting to kiss your child there, not because they're dirty or anything but because that kind of affection is also shown to your lover or SO. |