| Reviews for Coloring Outside the Lines |
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  Claire chapter 3 . 9/13/2021 I find this very realistic, you know not only in the choices and decisions but also in what the characters say, like the part where Angela had almost insulted Bella's dad being the chief of police. It is nice seeing they have normal conversations and make mistakes when using the nouns and all, like us. It is a wonderful story, I'm really glad I stumbled across The Red Line and then read this. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/28/2021 I know that you wrote this a looong time ago, but I’ve just stumbled upon it. This entire chapter had me laughing like a damn loon! My husband thinks I’m crazy but I loved it! Great job! |
 NarMaVeg chapter 1 . 8/22/2021 ohhh yessss! I m starting to read this sequel! |
| anushka.sh1209 chapter 39 . 6/27/2021 No this shouldn't be happening in TRL Edward was 26 and now he's turning 30 we should be happening his 27th bday |
| princeselisa chapter 44 . 5/18/2021 That was a great story. The last chapter had every emotion. I felt proud of them, sad about some of the lost angels, Anger for the little boy in the alley. What a heck of a final chapter. Excellent story. Thanks for sharing and giving them a happy ending |
| Alina Nyx chapter 44 . 4/7/2021 I know I should be grateful with what your wonderful mind has given us, but the selfish reader in me wants to never let these characters go. |
| Aleksandra24 chapter 1 . 8/9/2020 omg sequel? really? ok I'm reading right now omg I'm so excited! I even wrote review before I start to read lol |
| jikotakuhaibin chapter 44 . 7/16/2020 To the Wonderful WinndSinger, I first discovered your great stories 10 years ago during my Twilight-crazed days. Last week I rediscovered The Red Line and Coloring Outside the Lines and was reminded of your great talent. I love that it is not all about sex (although that sure spices things up!), but you really get into Edward's and Bella's minds and heart, and the twists and turns to the storyline often kept me reading and reading until late into the night. Thank you for sharing your mind and heart with us! |
| Mairaredbird chapter 1 . 6/21/2020 3 |
| twirob chapter 44 . 4/30/2020 ABSOLUTELY AWESOME ! Sequel ;) Thanks for sticking with it and completing it for us to read ;D |
| Guest chapter 28 . 7/24/2019 I loved the first story, but all of the black jokes are cringy and make me really uncomfortable. |
| vampiregirl9705 chapter 44 . 7/4/2019 I loved your sequel for TRL. They got the ending they deserved and the healing that needed to come afterwards. I cried and laughed with these characters, and learned to love each new one that was introduced! I’ll miss them , but I’m glad this sequel showed us their growth and new life and reality. Thank you! |
| Guest chapter 21 . 5/23/2019 il vaut mieux passé les chapitres horribles sans les lires |
| Guest chapter 44 . 4/27/2019 Wow, all the story was amazing. I loved this Edward and I really hated Kevin. Thanks for your time Regards LQUEZ |
| angelus15 chapter 12 . 1/20/2019 I love this chapter! I was literally laughing |