|Reviews for Coloring Outside the Lines|
| Guest chapter 16 . 2/15
But he kissed her back and let her kiss him. He cheated on Bella
| MyladyNancy chapter 27 . 2/16
I am not one for vulgar language or sex on the page but a friend said I needed to read this. aside for skimming the "love making" I absolutely love your Bella and Edward. and the story has been wow. I was almost sitting that stable stroking that sweet dancer with him... thank you for sharing
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/13
Ugh I fucking hate Bella fucking selfish cheating bitch! How dare you think these things of a stranger! If only Edward knew!
| BookWormGirl93 chapter 44 . 8/26/2016
what a touching story. idk how many times I cried. thanks for sharing.
| BookWormGirl93 chapter 18 . 8/25/2016
I think fifth harmony has the perfect song for this fic. it's called write on me. give it a listen.
| Perah246 chapter 1 . 8/3/2016
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| sprtgln chapter 44 . 7/19/2016
It's me again. Maybe I'm late *again*. But I can't help it *again too*.
Thanks for sharing your stories. They're great. I'm glad that I found them, and read them.
You get lots of love from me.
-sprtgln a.k.a praylearnwrite
| sprtgln chapter 20 . 7/15/2016
Help! Freeze me!
| vrjf76 chapter 8 . 6/16/2016
| Mae chapter 44 . 5/31/2016
Wow, doesn't cover it. Amazing job! Love both stories, couldn't wait to see what happened next. Love the ending. Although sad to not see more of edward and tao's relationship, that would have funny. Especially with how Edward was with Dancer's relationship.
| Read-Till-It-Hurts chapter 5 . 5/4/2016
Hi! I really love your story. Your plot is amazing and totally captivating. I just sped through Red Line and loved that there was a sequel! Everything is great but I noticed a lot of plot mix-ups and I was just wondering on a few of the details in both stories.
1. How old is Katie? At one point you said 9 and another 7.
2. How long was Edward a slave for?
3. What happened to Bella's mom? At first you said she abandoned Bella, then you said that she was remarried with Phil and frequently talked to Bella, and lastly you said she died from cancer.
4. Is Sir Kevin alive? You said he was burned to death in the fire along with Victoria in the last story. The story Jasper made up centered on how he killed Victoria and then got caught by the flames himself. In this sequel you mentioned reporting him and sending him to jail.
5. Does Bella know how to cook? In Red Line she was horrible at cooking and Edward was trying to teach her but now it seems like she was always cooking.
Sorry for all the questions, I love knowing everything about the characters and this is confusing me a bit. Thanks for such a great story :)
| 5262 chapter 2 . 4/20/2016
This is is no way meant to be snarky or mean, but Edward roars ALOT. It seems like every few paragraphs he is roaring, in both the previous story and this one. Just a little thing I noticed.
| Guest chapter 44 . 3/23/2016
I loved this story (or else i wouldn't have stuck this long and made it this far) but the end when Kevin and Raven show again is a bit extreme like i'd preferred reading her pregnancy and motherhood struggles over that but yeah you're great and keep going!
| gypsytrip chapter 44 . 12/29/2015
| gypsytrip chapter 36 . 12/27/2015
I don't know who these crazies are, saying this story is going nowhere. each chapter you put out, even if edward and bella aren't the main focus, leads us forward. edward is gaining confidence...so is bella. they've helped so many people. you're such a great writer.